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Band 5+: The graph below shows the changes in population in three cities (A, B, and C) between 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Population Growth in 3 Cities (2000-2020)", with the x-axis showing years (2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, 2020) and the y-axis showing Population in Millions (from 0 to 6). City A's population in millions was: 2.0 in 2000, 3.0 in 2005, 4.0 in 2010, 4.8 in 2015, and 5.0 in 2020. City B's population in millions was: 4.0 in 2000, 4.1 in 2005, 4.2 in 2010, 4.3 in 2015, and 4.5 in 2020. City C's population in millions was: 3.0 in 2000, 2.9 in 2005, 2.8 in 2010, 2.7 in 2015, and 2.5 in 2020.

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The line graph illustrates the changes of citizens in three cities including city A, B, and C, in the period of 2000 and 2020.

Overall, the most crowded city is city A, based on the domination regarding its population trends. Compared to city B with a slightly difference, while city C has the lowest trends.

In 2000s, city B accounted the highest population at 4 million people but slightly increased. Besides that, city C remained in the middle for some times at 3 million society until they experienced a decline. While city B is the highest, city A representing the lowest trends at 2 millions individuals but the trends developed after then.

In 2020, city A surged to its peak at 5 millions citizens, this was followed by city B at around 4,5 millions population. Whereas, city C experienced a steadily weakend changes at roughly 2,5 of people over the period.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, noting the overall growth of City A, the slight increase in City B, and the decline in City C. The report includes specific data points, such as the population figures for each city in 2000 and 2020. To improve, focus on providing a more structured and cohesive overview. Consider using more precise language and avoiding vague terms like 'slightly difference' or 'steadily weakend changes.' Also, ensure that comparisons are clear and directly support the overall summary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always logical or easy to follow. The 'overall' paragraph is somewhat vague. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to create a smoother narrative. For example, the connections between the population trends of the different cities are not always clearly articulated. Paragraphing could be improved to group related ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit awkward or imprecise. For instance, 'most crowded city' could be rephrased for greater accuracy. Consider using a wider range of vocabulary to describe population trends (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'remained stable,' 'declined gradually').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also somewhat basic, limiting the complexity of the information conveyed. For example, 'city B accounted the highest population' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy to improve the overall quality of the report.

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