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Band 5+: The graph below shows the contribution of three factors, agriculture manufacturing and business and financial services to the UK economy in the 20 century summarizing information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar graph labeled "Contribution of selected sectors to the UK economy in the twentieth century" with four time periods on the x-axis (1900, 1950, 1975, 2000) and percentage on the y-axis (0-60%). There are three colored bars for each time period representing Agriculture (blue), Manufacturing (purple), and Business and Financial (green). In 1900, Agriculture was around 8%, Manufacturing about 45%, and Business and Financial roughly 18%. In 1950, Agriculture was about 6%, Manufacturing around 40%, and Business and Financial approximately 30%. In 1975, Agriculture was almost 4%, Manufacturing approximately 35%, and Business and Financial close to 45%. In 2000, Agriculture was roughly 2%, Manufacturing around 25%, and Business and Financial approximately 55%.

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The bar chart illustrates investment of three factors, agriculture, manufacturing and bussiness and financial services to the economy of UK in four different years, 1900, 1950, 1975 and 2000.

Overall, it can be seen that while manufacturing was gradually falling, business and financial services steadily increased over the period. Moreover, agriculture was the highest at the beginning, but became the lowest at the end.

In 1940 agriculture was the highest factor among all, in 1950 it slightly raised to 50% after being around 57% at 1900 and reached its peak. But in 1975 agrriculture sharply fell to 10%, and became the lowest factor. Agriculture fell to its lowest point in 2000, to around 3%.

Business and financial services was moderately raising over the all period, and in 2000, reached highest point out of all. Manufacturing, in 1900, was at around 42%, but gradually decreased to 30% in 1975, and rapidly dropped in 2000.

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The report provides a general overview of the trends in the graph, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. The description of the data contains some incorrect values, which affects the accuracy of the report. To improve, ensure that the data cited is accurate and pay attention to the specific values and trends shown in the graph.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the precision and sophistication of the description. There is a reliance on simple words and phrases, and a lack of varied language to express trends and comparisons effectively. Expanding the range of vocabulary would enhance the report's clarity and impact.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structures are often simple and lack complexity, and there are inaccuracies in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Correcting these errors and incorporating a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the report's clarity and credibility.

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