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Band 6+: The graph below shows the employment rate of each gender in four differnet countries in 2002.

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The image features a bar chart displaying employment rates by gender across four countries in 2002: South Africa shows males at 60% and females at 30%; Chile has males at 70% and females at 40%; Finland's male employment rate is 70% with females at 42%; Norway presents males at 78% and females at 50%.

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The bar chart illustrates the rate of employment of two sex in four various nations in the year of 2002.

Overall, the employment rate in Norway was the highest in both genders. On the other hand, the male employment rate in South Africa was the lowest and the female employment was the least in Chile.

In detail, regarding to male, the employment rate in Norway was the highest with almost 80% in 2002. Following two countries with similar data, Chile and Finland, both nations had the employment rate nearly 70%. Furthermore, the rate of employment was the lowest, which was 50% only.

As for females, the employment rate in Norway was the highest too with 75% in 2002. In addition, the employment rate in Finland is close behind just 10% lower. Besides, the employment rate in South Africa and Chile were 35% and 32% respectively during the same time. Additionally, the male employment rate in four nations was higher than the female.

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