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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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The image shows a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" over six months in 2011, with three lines representing "in person," "by letter/email," and "by telephone." In-person enquiries start at 600 in January, dip to 500 in February, rise to 700 in March, then dramatically increase to 2000 by June. Letter/email enquiries begin at 400, steadily increase each month, reaching 900 by June. Telephone enquiries start at 200, slightly decrease to 150 in February, then progressively rise to 1600 by June.

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The provided line graph illustrates how many enquiries were made to tourist information office via three different channels namely telephone, letter/email, and in person between January and June 2001.

Overall, it is clear that enquiries made in person and by telephone saw a significant upward trend over six-month period. However, the number of enquiries sent via email or letter experienced a steady decline with time.

Looking at the graph in more detail, in Jan, telephone enquiries were the most popular choice, starting at 800, while in-person enquiries were the lowest at 400. However, in-person visits increased sharply, overpassing telephone calls in March at around 800. After that, both methods grew steadily, with in-person enquiries peaked at approximately 1,200 and phone calls reached about 1,100 in June.

In contrast, enquiries received by email or letter started at 600 in Jan and remained stable until February. Eventually, this figure decreased consistently throughout the remaining months, dropped to just 200 by end of the June.

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enquiries: 7

telephone: 4

in-person: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies in the data and misinterprets the trend for letter/email enquiries. The actual data shows that letter/email enquiries increased steadily, not declined. Additionally, the figures for telephone and in-person enquiries are incorrect. To improve, ensure that the data is accurately reported and that the trends described match the visual information. Also, avoid making unsupported claims and focus on selecting the most significant features.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'overpassing telephone calls' and 'by end of the June'). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some transitions between sentences could be smoother. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that sentences within paragraphs are logically connected. Use a wider range of linking words and phrases to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'channels', 'upward trend'). However, there are inaccuracies and unnatural collocations (e.g., 'overpassing telephone calls' should be 'overtaking telephone calls', 'by end of the June' should be 'by the end of June'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of certain words (e.g., 'enquiries'). To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms and ensure correct word choice and collocation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity (e.g., 'enquiries made to tourist information office' should be 'enquiries made to the tourist information office', 'over six-month period' should be 'over a six-month period', 'in-person enquiries peaked at approximately 1,200' should be 'in-person enquiries peaked at approximately 1,200' (missing 'having' or restructuring), 'dropped to just 200 by end of the June' should be 'dropped to just 200 by the end of June'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but there are some missing articles and prepositions. To improve, review grammar rules for articles, prepositions, and verb forms, and proofread to eliminate minor errors.

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