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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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The image shows a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" over six months in 2011, with three lines representing "in person," "by letter/email," and "by telephone." In-person enquiries start at 600 in January, dip to 500 in February, rise to 700 in March, then dramatically increase to 2000 by June. Letter/email enquiries begin at 400, steadily increase each month, reaching 900 by June. Telephone enquiries start at 200, slightly decrease to 150 in February, then progressively rise to 1600 by June.

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The line graph illustrates the number of queries collected by the tourist information office in a city for half a year in 2011. Overall, the number of three types of queries experienced different trends in the time period. While the number of queries made by telephone and in person saw a significant rise, the volume of queries received via letter and email fell over time.

As is shown by the graph, the number of letters and emails sent to the office started at under 800 in January followed by steadily falling to around 750 in March. Then, it went down considerably until it fell to just under 400 in May. In subsequent months it stayed steady.

By contrast, the number of queries received in person experienced a substantial increase throughout the time frame. In January 2011 it was the least used means of queries with just over 400 requests. In a period from January to March the number of in-person requests jumped to 800, almost doubling. Then it rocketed until the end of the period in June, reaching a peak of 1900

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queries: 6

period: 3

january: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data description. For example, the report states that the volume of queries received via letter and email fell over time, but the visual description indicates that letter/email enquiries steadily increased each month. Also, the report mentions that the number of letters and emails sent to the office started at under 800 in January, but the graph shows that it started at 400. The report also states that in January 2011, in-person requests were just over 400, but the graph shows that it was 600. To improve, ensure that the data is accurately represented and avoid misinterpretations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence issues. The overview paragraph is adequate but contains an inaccuracy ('fell over time' is incorrect). The second paragraph inaccurately describes the trend for letter/email queries. The final paragraph has some issues with flow and organization. Consider using more precise language to link ideas and ensure the information is presented in a logical order.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to enhance it further. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'number of queries,' try incorporating synonyms or more descriptive phrases. Also, be careful about using vocabulary accurately ('volume of queries received via letter and email fell over time' is not accurate).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of prepositions. For example, 'As is shown by the graph' is a slightly awkward construction. Proofreading carefully can help identify and correct these errors.

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