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The image shows a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" over six months in 2011, with three lines representing "in person," "by letter/email," and "by telephone." In-person enquiries start at 600 in January, dip to 500 in February, rise to 700 in March, then dramatically increase to 2000 by June. Letter/email enquiries begin at 400, steadily increase each month, reaching 900 by June. Telephone enquiries start at 200, slightly decrease to 150 in February, then progressively rise to 1600 by June.

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Below is a line graph illustrating the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a period of six months in 2011.

Overall, enquiries made by telephone recorded the highest in January while that made physically recorded the lowest in January. Both enquiries made in person and by telephone saw a significant increase.

Enquiries made in person made a steady increase over the six-month period. It recorded 400 inquiries in January, slightly made an increament to 800 by march where by the numbers went higher sharply by around 500 enquiries. It then significantly increased to around 1900 in the month of June.On the other hand, enquiries made by telephone had fluctuating records upto the month of March. It started at around 900 in the first month being the highest and dropped to 800 in February and rose again to 1000 in March. The records stabilised at 1000 for a month and increased steadily to 1600 in June.

Contrary, enquiries made letter/mail decreased over the period. It recorded around 780 in January and slightly dropped to around 680 by March. It had a significant decrease by 280 in May .It maintained at 400 during the last month

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enquiries: 6

around: 5

month: 5

recorded: 4

january: 4

march: 4

period: 3

telephone: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies regarding the data trends and values provided in the visual description. The overview is partially correct, but the body paragraphs present information that contradicts the visual data (for example, describing letter/email enquiries as decreasing when they are described as increasing, and misreporting the starting values for telephone and in-person enquiries). To improve, ensure that the trends described (increasing, decreasing, or fluctuating) align strictly with the data provided, and double-check that the numerical values cited match the source information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is sometimes interrupted by awkward phrasing and logical inconsistencies. While you use some cohesive devices like 'On the other hand' and 'Contrary', they are not always used correctly (e.g., 'Contrary' should be 'In contrast'). To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that the transition between sentences flows naturally. Avoid starting sentences with 'It' too frequently, as this can make the writing feel repetitive and disconnected.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and contains several errors in word formation and usage. For example, 'made an increament' is incorrect; you should use 'showed an increase' or 'increased'. There is also some repetition of words like 'recorded' and 'enquiries'. To reach a higher band, aim to use a wider variety of synonyms for trends (e.g., 'surged', 'climbed', 'declined', 'fluctuated') and ensure that word forms (noun vs. verb) are used accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'where by the numbers went higher sharply'). Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with spacing after periods. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that your verb tenses are used correctly when describing past trends. Practicing the use of prepositional phrases (e.g., 'an increase of 500' vs 'increased by 500') will also help improve accuracy.

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