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Band 5+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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The image shows a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" over six months in 2011, with three lines representing "in person," "by letter/email," and "by telephone." In-person enquiries start at 600 in January, dip to 500 in February, rise to 700 in March, then dramatically increase to 2000 by June. Letter/email enquiries begin at 400, steadily increase each month, reaching 900 by June. Telephone enquiries start at 200, slightly decrease to 150 in February, then progressively rise to 1600 by June.

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The line graph compares the number of three different inquiries received by the tourist information office in per day over a six months period in 2011.

Overall, it can be seen that the number of inquiries in person and via telephone recorded significant upward trend, with in person most popular choice by June. By contrast, writing inquiries via letter or email saw a considerably decline over the time.

In terms of January, the number of inquiries received by in person started at about 425, but the trend grew steadily to reach about 800 in March. Afterwards, the figure increased rapidly to hit its highest point at just under 2000 in June.

In January, the figure of telephone inquiries recorded at just under 1000. However, the figure experienced a steady growth to 1000 in April. Moreover, the trend increased rapidly to reach a peak at around 1600.

In contrast, the number of received by telephone showed a steady decline, with just under 800, then the figure experienced a slowly decline and reached at about 400

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Vocabulary Repetition:

inquiries: 5

number: 4

figure: 4

received: 3

person: 3

telephone: 3

trend: 3

decline: 3

about: 3

under: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies. For instance, the starting values for in-person and telephone enquiries are incorrect, and the description of letter/email enquiries as declining is opposite to the actual trend. Additionally, the final paragraph mistakenly refers to 'telephone' instead of 'letter/email'. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately reported and that the trends described match the visual information. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'in per day' and 'a six months period' for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and separate paragraphs for each category. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'the figure of telephone inquiries' and 'the number of received by telephone') and a missing final sentence for the last paragraph. The overview is present but could be more precise. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that pronouns and references are used consistently. Also, add a concluding sentence to the final paragraph to complete the idea.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'upward trend', 'decline', 'increased rapidly', 'hit its highest point'), which is appropriate for the task. However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'inquiries' vs. 'enquiries', 'in person' used as a noun, 'the figure of telephone inquiries'). To improve, use more precise and varied expressions, such as 'enquiries made in person', 'written enquiries', and 'telephone enquiries'. Also, avoid repeating 'the figure' and instead use synonyms like 'the number' or 'the count'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'in per day' should be 'per day', 'a six months period' should be 'a six-month period', 'recorded significant upward trend' should be 'recorded a significant upward trend', and 'saw a considerably decline' should be 'saw a considerable decline'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, review basic grammar rules, especially articles, prepositions, and singular/plural forms. Additionally, ensure that each sentence is complete and clearly conveys the intended meaning.

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