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Band 5+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries to tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email and in person from January 2001 to June 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph of enquiries to a tourist information office from January to June 2001 by three methods: in person, by telephone, and by email/letter. January figures: in person 450, by telephone 900, by email/letter 750; February: in person 600, by telephone 850, by email/letter 700; March: in person 800, by telephone 1000, by email/letter 700; April: in person 1200, by telephone 1000, by email/letter 580; May: in person 1400, by telephone 1400, by email/letter 400; June: in person 1900, by telephone 1600, by email/letter 200.

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The graph depicts the number of asking to tourist information workplace made by telephone, letter and email, and in individual between January 2001 and June 2001. Overall, number of enquires in person strongly increased higher than both by telephone and email/letter, and the opposite of rising tourism is by email and letter is decreased. From my perspective tourists are preferred asking by telephone and in person much more than by email and letter because it is convenience and fast response to save up more time.

Initially, asking by telephone is slightly dipped from January to March, and remain stabled to April. In addition, from April to middle of the year is steady increased. Next the email and letter is remained steady from January to March. Unfortunately between March and June is declined around 400 of enquires.

Furthermore, start from January in person is rised to 1200 in the past six months, which is aswsome while by email and letter is dropped 75% less compared from the start of January.

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letter: 5

email: 5

january: 5

telephone: 4

asking: 3

person: 3

march: 3

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The report attempts to address the task, but there are issues with organization, accuracy, and language. The overview is present but could be more concise and focused. The body paragraphs contain some relevant information but also include inaccuracies and lack specific data. The language is not always clear, with grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affecting comprehension. To improve, focus on providing accurate data, organizing the information more logically, and using clearer, more precise language.

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