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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of participants according to activity at a social center in the Australian city of Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.

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The image illustrates the number of participants (y-axis) across six activities from 2000 to 2020 (x-axis). Film club participants start at 50 in 2000, slightly increasing to 55 in 2005, fluctuating around 55 from 2010 to 2020. Martial arts start at 0 in 2000, rise sharply to 30 by 2005, reach 35 by 2010, and jump nearly vertically to 55 by 2015 and 60 in 2020. Amateur dramatics participants are 40 in 2000, grow to 45 by 2005, fall to 30 by 2010, dip more to 20 by 2015, and stabilize around 25 by 2020. Table tennis participants begin at 30 in 2000, drop to 25 in 2005, and continue declining to 20 by 2010, 15 by 2015, and 10 by 2020. Musical performances participants start at just below 20 in 2000, slightly decrease to 18 in 2005, drop further to approximately 14 by 2010, rise briefly to 15 by 2015 before descending sharply to 8 by 2020.
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At first glance, the line chart given shows the data on the number of participants in some hobby clubs by prevalence between 2000 and 2020.

It can be seen that, Film club and Martial arts were the activities that were mostly participated with little fluctuation in the number of individuals. Despite Amateur dramatics being the third most participated hobby club, it sharply went down, appearing as the least visited club. The opposite situation happened to Table tennis, which dramatically increased, becoming the second popular activity by the end of the given period. There was also a moderate increase in the musical performances club, which was noted only 5 years later after the start of the data given.

Film club was the most popular hobby club among people. There were around 63 individuals in 2000, then it dropped a little in 2010 to 60 people being interested in that direction, and grew again to 65 people in 2020. The opposite fluctuation happened to Martial arts. It started at 37 in 2000, after that rose to about 39, and slightly decreased to 37 again.

There were more dramatic changes with amateur dramatics and table tennis. Amateur dramatics was on the third place by popularity in 2000 with 28 individuals participating there. It peaked at 30 in 2005, and drastically decreased at 8 in 2020, becoming the least favorable hobby club. In contrast, Table tennis had approximately 18 people in its club, slightly increased to 20 in 2005, remained stable until 2010, and sharply increased to around 52 in 2020 being the second most popular activity. Musical performances appeared only in 2005 with 0 people in it, slightly increased to around 18 people in 2020.

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Overall Band Score

6
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
people: 6
hobby: 4
increased: 4
individuals: 3
amateur: 3
dramatics: 3
being: 3
table: 3
tennis: 3
popular: 3
there: 3
around: 3
slightly: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and some misinterpretations of the data. The overview is partially effective, but some details are not entirely accurate. The body paragraphs contain some incorrect data points and make some inaccurate comparisons. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring that comparisons are based on correct information. Pay close attention to the specific values and trends in the graph to avoid misrepresenting the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report has some coherence issues. The information is not always presented in a logical order, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs could be clearer. For example, the shift in focus from overall trends to specific details in the second paragraph feels a bit abrupt. Consider using transition words and phrases to guide the reader through your analysis and create a smoother flow.

Lexical Resource

6
The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the description. For example, instead of saying something 'sharply went down,' you could use more specific terms like 'declined significantly' or 'plummeted.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6
The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies. For example, 'mostly participated with little fluctuation' is awkward phrasing. There are also errors in verb tense and subject-verb agreement. While the errors do not completely obscure the meaning, they do detract from the overall clarity and impact of the report. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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