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Band 5+: The graph below shows the per capita consumption of whole milk and low-fat milk in the United States between 1970 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows graph of U.S. per capita milk consumption (1970-2015) in gallons, by year: 1970 whole milk 25, low-fat milk approximately 3; 1980 whole milk 19, low-fat milk 8; 1990 both whole and low-fat milk at about 11; 2000 whole milk 8, low-fat milk approximately 15; 2010 whole milk approximately 5, low-fat milk 20; 2015 whole milk 4, low-fat milk approximately 21.

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The line graph elucidates the proportion of capita consumption of whole milk and low-fat milk in the United State between 45 years of time line from 1970 to 2015.

Overall, it can be seen that both category experienced an opposite trajectory, while whole milk recorded pronounced decline, meanwhile low-fat milk showed an upward trend.

To commence with, consumption of whole milk considerably higher than low- fat mike, accounting 25 gallon in the initial year before declining further to 20 gallon in latter year. Thereafter, consumption of whole milk decreased steadily stood nearly 7 gallon in 2010 before culminating at 5 gallon at the end of the period. according to given chart, low-fat milk consumption increased over the time period, beginning around 6 gallons in the initial year while, this figure rose gradually to nearly 15 gallon in 1990 and stay consistence to 2010. Afterwards, consumption of low-fat milk declined slightly to approximately 13 gallon.

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gallon: 6

consumption: 5

whole: 4

low-fat: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends of both milk types, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is correctly identified, but specific data points are often incorrect (e.g., whole milk consumption in 1980, low-fat milk starting value, and the final values). The report also omits the crossover point in 1990 and the significant rise in low-fat milk after 2000. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately reported and make clearer comparisons between the two data sets. Additionally, avoid vague phrases like 'latter year' and 'stay consistence' for clarity and precision.

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The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the body paragraphs lack clear organization and logical progression. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'meanwhile' is used incorrectly). The flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. To improve, use a clearer paragraphing strategy, ensure each paragraph has a central topic, and use a range of linking words accurately to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. Some words are used inappropriately (e.g., 'elucidates', 'proportion of capita consumption', 'mike' instead of 'milk'). There is an attempt to use synonyms (e.g., 'decline', 'upward trend'), but the language is not always natural or sophisticated. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and data, and ensure word choice is precise and appropriate for the context.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'consumption ... accounting' should be 'accounted for'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'stood' should be 'standing'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often repetitive and lack complexity. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, review basic grammar rules, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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