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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

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The image comprises four pie charts representing data for two towns, A and B, for the years 1960 and 2010, with each pie chart divided into three sectors: manufacturing, sales, and services. Town A, in 1960, shows manufacturing at 30%, sales at 61%, and services at 9%; in 2010, manufacturing at 6%, sales at 20%, and services at 74%. Town B, in 1960, has manufacturing at 70%, sales at 20%, and services at 10%; in 2010, manufacturing is at 25%, sales at 22%, and services at 53%.

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The pie charts depictes the proportion of laymens indulged in different sectors in town A and town B from 1960 and 2010.

It is evident that in Town A services sector became popular in 2010, whereas manufacture was dominating in 1960. However, in Town B manufacturing related jobs were in high demand in both years.

In detail, Town A in 1960 had 29% in Services sector, 30% in sales sector and 41% in Manufacturing sector, which was highest among others. After 50 years in 2010, Services sector increased at 64%, whereas Sales and Manufacturing sector significantly dropped to 16% and 20%, respectively.

Furthermore, Town B in 1960 had just 10% in Services sector, which was lowest than in Town A, followed by Sales sector, which also reduced by 10%, however Manufacturing sector was at 70%. Moving to the year 2010, Services sector slightly rose at 25% and Sales sector surged by 2%. It is clearly seen that Manufacturing sector decreased by 12%, but it was the dominating sector in both years.

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manufacturing: 5

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies in the data. The overall description of trends is present but could benefit from improved precision.

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Band 5+: The graph below shows the percentage of people in different age groups in one city who attended music concerts between 2010 and 2015.

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