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Band 4+: The graph below shows the percentage of urban / suburban and rural households in a European country that had Internet access between 2008 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing Urban and Rural categories from 2008 to 2013 with numerical data as follows: 2008 - Urban 10, Rural 3; 2009 - Urban 20, Rural 5; 2010 - Urban 30, Rural 10; 2011 - Urban 40, Rural 15; 2012 - Urban 45, Rural 20; 2013 - Urban 50, Rural 35.

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The line graph illustrates the figures of urban and rural households with the internet access from 2008 to 2013.

Overall, It can bee seen that urban and rural showed a constant increase during the period. However, urban was expected to experience a higher rise than rural in 5 years.

Taking everything into account, urban reached around 50 percents in total from 2008 to 2013, and it was found that the highest rise appeared by approximately 29 from 2008 to 2009. While urban expanded partially at nearly 3 percents from 2012 to 2013.

On the other hand, rural declined a moderately grow by only 37 in total in 5 years, which had the lowest number of residence after urban. Moreover, it remained a stable growth during the period.

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The report identifies some overall trends but contains inaccuracies in the data reported and lacks specific details. The language is also not always clear. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and using more accurate language to describe the trends. Also, ensure that all key features of the graph are addressed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but doesn't fully enhance the clarity of the message. To improve coherence, focus on creating clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs, ensuring each paragraph has a central idea, and using more precise language to guide the reader through the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the data. There is an attempt to use descriptive language, but it often results in inaccuracies. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, and ensure that the words you choose accurately reflect the data presented in the graph.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofreading carefully and seeking feedback from others can also help identify and correct errors.

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