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Band 5+: The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the United Kingdom between 1970 and 2004.

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The image displays a line graph titled "United Kingdom" with x-axis as years from 1970-2004 and y-axis as index (1970 = 100); it depicts trends for Coastal species (20), Woodland species (33), Farmland species (19), and All species (111); for Coastal species, the index rises from 100 in 1970 to 120 in 1973, drops to 110 in 1976, increases to 135 in 1985, decreases to 120 in 1988, climbs to 140 in 1995, and maintains until 2004; for Woodland species, the index remains steady at 100 from 1970 to 1990, then rises to 110 in 2004; for Farmland species, the index declines from 100 in 1970 to 60 in 1990, rises to 70 in 1995, and remains until 2004; for All species, the index starts at 100 in 1970, gradually increases to 110 in 2004.

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The line graph represents the demographic figures of different kinds of wild birds in the United Kingdom from 1970 to 2004. Overall, although all types of birds experienced modest fluctuations, only Coastal species showed a significantly increasing number throughout the years.

On the one hand, Coastal species began with steady growing figures between 1970 and 1985, accounting for 130%. This species also started to become the highest percentage among others. However, the figure faced a slight fluctuation around 140% to 130% before it peaked at around 131%.

On Woodland species, the percentages started to grow by 10% and became the highest figure among others for two years. Despite minor fluctuations more than 10 years, Woodland species declined gradually to less than 90% by 2004.

Meanwhile Farmland species showed inconsistent figures in the first six years, reaching 110%. Additionally, the number of species faced a sharp decreasing figure approximately by 45% in 1988. This species continued a minor fluctuations trend before falling to 60% in the final years.

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species: 8

years: 4

figures: 3

fluctuations: 3

figure: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant inaccuracies in data interpretation and contradictions. While the overview identifies a general trend, the body paragraphs contain conflicting information; for example, the description of Woodland species claims they became the highest figure but then states they declined to less than 90%, which contradicts the visual description of an upward trend. Additionally, the report frequently confuses 'index' values with 'percentages' and 'number of species,' which can mislead the reader. To improve, ensure that the trends described (increasing vs. decreasing) strictly align with the data provided and maintain consistency within each paragraph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report uses some cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'On the one hand', 'Meanwhile'), but they are often used incorrectly or ineffectively. 'On the one hand' is typically used to present a contrasting argument in a discussion essay, not to introduce a body paragraph in a data report. The progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed, and the logical connection between sentences could be strengthened to ensure the reader can follow the trends effortlessly. To improve, focus on using transitions that signal comparison or contrast (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Regarding') rather than argumentative markers.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat repetitive and occasionally used inaccurately. For example, using 'demographic figures' for bird populations is slightly unnatural, and referring to the index values as 'percentages' or 'accounting for 130%' is a significant lexical error, as an index value is not the same as a percentage. There is also some confusion in word choice, such as 'the number of species faced a sharp decreasing figure'. To improve, ensure you distinguish between 'index values' and 'percentages', and work on using more precise verbs for trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'plummeted', 'stabilized').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede clarity. Issues include subject-verb agreement, incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'fluctuations more than 10 years'), and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'started to become the highest percentage among others'). There are also errors in how data is integrated into sentences. To improve, focus on the accuracy of complex sentence structures and ensure that modifiers (like 'gradually' or 'sharply') are placed correctly to describe the movement of the data.

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