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Band 4+: The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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The image charts the percentage of the population aged 65 and older spanning ninety years (1940-2040) in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. Japan's population aged 65+ started at 5% in 1940, hit 10% by 1990, and is projected to reach 30% by 2040. Sweden's proportion began at 7% in 1940, reaching 17% by 1990, and anticipating 25% by 2040. The USA's percentage commenced at 8% in 1940, achieving 13% by 1990, and expecting to hit nearly 23% by 2040.

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The ratio of the community aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in three various provincials is illustrated by table.

Overall, when looked at the graph in general, the percentage of Japanese population had an increase trend. The ratio of USA, on the other hand, had a tardy rise trend. The ratio of Sweden who aged 65 and over had the second highest increase trend.

When looked at the graph in detail, the proportion of population who were japanese aged 65 and over went up quite slowly from 5% percentage proportion to 16% percentage proportion between 1940 and until 2030. Then, rate of Japanese population who were aged 65 and over rose sharply between 2030 and 2040. The ratio of USA population who aged 65 and over uprised approximately 9% to approximately 24% ratio from 1940 2040. Besides that, from 1970 to 1980 and from 2025 to 2040 were increased heavily. The rate of Sweden community aged 65 and over rose like as a step by step about 7% to 25% percentage from 1940 to 2040.

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The report provides an overview of the graph and describes the trends in the proportion of the population aged 65 and over in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. However, there are some inaccuracies and the details are not consistently addressed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are issues with paragraphing and some ideas are not consistently linked. The progression of ideas could be improved for better clarity.

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There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and some awkward phrasing. More precise and varied vocabulary could be used to better describe the trends.

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The report demonstrates an attempt at a variety of sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors, especially in subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and word choice. Punctuation also needs improvement for better accuracy.

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