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The image shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and the USA: in 1940, Japan and USA both near 5%, Sweden near 8%; in 1960, Japan still around 5%, USA close to 9%, Sweden around 10%; in 1980, Japan about 8%, USA about 11%, Sweden surpassing 14%; in 2000, Japan and Sweden equal at 15%, USA near 13%; in 2020, Japan at 28%, Sweden and USA converging near 20%; forecast for 2040, Japan leads at approximately 27%, Sweden nearly 25%, USA close to 23%.

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The graph shows summary proportion of population elder people (aged 65 and over) from 1940 to 2040 in Japan , Sweden and United states of America.

Overall, as compared in the graph we saw insignificant declines and increases about 2-3 % in three different countries before 2000 , but after this year population will grow rapidly.

The population of the USA aged 65 and over is expected to grow significantly by 2040 (with 22%), while Sweden also didn’t lag behind even will overtake the United States in percentage of senior citizens until 2040 (25%).

By the way Japan had the lowest number of elderly people in country, but as we see on the graph, population will grow significantly after 2020 and will lead with whole 28 %

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and lacks detail. The writing is not always clear, and the organization could be improved. To improve, provide more specific data from the graph, avoid generalizations, and ensure accurate comparisons between the countries. Also, focus on presenting a clearer overall trend and use more precise language. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. For example, 'population will grow rapidly' could be improved to 'the population is projected to grow rapidly.' Pay close attention to sentence structure and ensure that your writing is grammatically sound.

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