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Band 4+: The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph with the proportion of the population aged 65 and over from 1940 to 2040 in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. In 1940, USA: 9%, Sweden: 7%, Japan: 5%. By 1960, USA: 10%, Sweden: 8%, Japan: 5%. In 1980, USA: 11.5%, Sweden: 15%, Japan: 5%. In 2000, USA: 14%, Sweden: 17%, Japan: 8%. By 2020, USA: 16%, Sweden: 20%, Japan: 10%. Projected for 2040, USA: 23%, Sweden: 25%, Japan: 27%.

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The line graph gives information regarding the ratio of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in Japan, Sweden, USA.

Overall, it is clear that the population of Japan is expected to increase dramatically, where as the proportion of Sweden and USA searched gradually.

In 1940, the population of Japan was at 5% while the value of Sweden and USA about 7% and 9%. In 1980, the amount of Japan slightly decrease lower than 5% but the figure of Sweden and USA were increased sharply 14% and 15%. In 2000, the average of Japan was soared at 5% and the figure of Sweden and USA had decreased about 14% and 15%.

In 2020, the amount of Japan was grew 10% but the proportion of Sweden gradually decline under 20% and the USA was skyrockted about 16%. In 2040, the number of Japan will go up dramatically at 25% while other two countries Sweden and USA will have risen 25% and under twenty five almost about 23%.So this graph which show the highest polulation of Japan in the future.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and inconsistencies in the data reported. The organization is present but could be improved with clearer paragraphing and transitions. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring a logical flow of information.

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The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of inappropriate word choice (e.g., 'searched gradually,' 'skyrockted'). Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and proportions. Use more precise language to convey the information accurately.

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