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Band 6+: The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a line graph depicting the annual earnings (in dollars) from 2000 to 2010 of three bakeries: Amandine Bakery, Mari Bakeshop, and Bolo Cakery. The earnings are as follows: Amandine Bakery - 2000: $40,000, 2001: $50,000, 2002: $55,000, 2003: $70,000, 2004: $60,000, 2005: $65,000, 2006: $75,000, 2007: $80,000, 2008: $85,000, 2009: $90,000, 2010: $95,000. Mari Bakeshop - 2000: 80,000, 2001: $85,000, 2002: $75,000, 2003: $80,000, 2004: $90,000, 2005: $70,000, 2006: $75,000, 2007: $80,000, 2008: $85,000, 2009: $90,000, 2010: $120,000. Bolo Cakery - 2000: $100,000, 2001: $110,000, 2002: $120,000, 2003: $140,000, 2004: $130,000, 2005: $110,000, 2006: $115,000, 2007: $120,000, 2008: $125,000, 2009: $130,000, 2010: $140,000.
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The line graph illustrates how many daily views were seen at different times from January to December. Overall, the figures for the 6pm and the 9:30pm news fluctuated, while the 1pm news remained stable throughout the entire period. The most preferable time to see the news was 6pm over the whole period.

In January, the figure for 6pm news stood out with 5 million daily views, which was its peak. After that, the figure for 6pm news fluctuated over the whole period and significantly decreased to just over 3 million in December. The 9:30pm news started the period with about 3 million views on a daily basis and gradually went up to almost 4 million in May. The 9:30pm news witnessed a sharp rise of approximately 1 million in August and recovered from August’s collapse. The figure increased gradually and ended the period with 3 million daily views.

With regard to other hours, the figure for 1pm news remained stable with well above 1 million viewers per day. In May, the 11 p.m. news was introduced, and it experienced a fourfold increase, with 4 million views in August. The 11pm news declined rapidly at the end of the period with about 1 million.

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Overall Band Score

6.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
million: 9
period: 5
daily: 4
views: 4
figure: 4
9:30pm: 3
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Task Response

5
The response only generally addresses the requirements of the task. The information presented is inaccurate with respect to the visual provided. The response describes trends and figures that do not align with the provided line graph, which depicts the annual earnings of three bakeries, not news viewing figures. To improve, ensure that the description accurately reflects the data presented in the graph. Focus on describing the actual trends and values for each bakery's earnings over the given period.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The report is generally organized with an overview and body paragraphs. However, the information presented does not align with the visual description provided. The report describes news viewing figures at different times of the day, while the visual description is about the annual earnings of three bakeries. This misalignment affects the coherence of the report. To improve, ensure the report accurately reflects the data in the visual description.

Lexical Resource

7
The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe trends and changes. Phrases like 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable,' 'sharp rise,' and 'declined rapidly' are used appropriately. However, the vocabulary is somewhat limited and could be enhanced with more varied and precise language to describe the data accurately. For example, instead of just saying 'fluctuated,' you could specify the degree and pattern of fluctuation. Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is relevant to the actual data presented in the visual description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

8
The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with very few errors. A variety of sentence structures are used effectively. To further improve, focus on using more complex sentence structures where appropriate and ensuring that all sentences are clear and concise. However, the primary focus should be on aligning the content with the visual description.

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