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Band 5+: The graph shows the information about the number of marriages in the UK from 1951 to 2001.

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The image shows a line graph with three data series for marriages spanning the years 1951, 1961, 1971, 1981, 1991, and 2001: "All Marriages" starts at ~380,000 in 1951, rises to ~420,000 in 1961, peaks at ~480,000 in 1971, and declines steadily to ~310,000 in 2001; "First Marriages" starts at ~300,000 in 1951, rises to ~350,000 in 1961, peaks at ~370,000 in 1971, and then declines to ~200,000 in 2001; "Remarriages" starts at ~70,000 in 1951, dips to ~60,000 in 1961, rises to ~110,000 in 1981, and increases progressively to ~130,000 in 2001.

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Given is a graph illustrating how the number of marriages changed in UK over a 50-year period from 1951 to 2001

Overall, it is clear that the popularity of remarriages showed a increase, while the figuress for all marriages and first marriages showed a downward trend.

Commerncing with the first marriages almost stayed unchanged over the thirty decades at neraly 350000 marriages, after which is steadily declined to about 270000 marriages in 2001. A similar trend can also be found in the all marriages. The figure for the number of all marriages fluctuated between 400000 and 45000, then it steadily declined to about 390000 marriage in 2001.

By contrast, the figure for the number of remarriages almost stayed unchanged over the thirty decades at neraly 150000 marriages, after which is steadily increased from 150000 to 210000 marriages in 1991 to 2001, approximately equaling that for the first marriages in 2001.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for all marriages and first marriages are not accurately described (e.g., the peak in 1971 and the exact values are misreported). The description of remarriages is also inaccurate, as it does not mention the initial dip and the rise is not correctly represented. Additionally, there are spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'Commerncing', 'figuress', 'neraly', 'is steadily declined') that affect clarity. To improve, ensure that key data points are correctly identified and described, and proofread for language accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, the phrase 'Commerncing with the first marriages' is awkward, and the shift from discussing first marriages to all marriages could be smoother. The overview is present but could be more clearly separated from the details. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect, with cohesive devices that guide the reader effortlessly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at variety (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'steadily declined', 'downward trend'), but there are several inaccuracies and repetitions. For instance, 'figuress' is a misspelling, 'neraly' should be 'nearly', and 'Commerncing' should be 'Commencing'. The phrase 'the popularity of remarriages showed a increase' is awkward; 'an increase' is correct, and 'popularity' is not the most precise term. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'witnessed a rise', 'experienced a gradual decrease', and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that hinder clarity. Examples include 'showed a increase' (should be 'an increase'), 'the figuress' (should be 'the figures'), 'over the thirty decades' (should be 'over the three decades'), and 'after which is steadily declined' (should be 'after which it steadily declined'). There are also run-on sentences and missing commas. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and sentence structure. Practicing writing with a variety of complex sentences while maintaining accuracy will help raise the score.

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