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Band 6+: The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart showing percentages for Watching and Participating in various sports. The data is as follows: Football (Watching: 45%, Participating: 10%), Rugby (Watching: 30%, Participating: 20%), Basketball (Watching: 38%, Participating: 25%), Badminton (Watching: 29%, Participating: 25%), Fishing (Watching: 15%, Participating: 50%), and Horse riding and racing (Watching: 45%, Participating: 18%).

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The bar chart compares the proportion of male aged 16-25 in a country preferring watching six sports with those wanting to join in them.

Overall, football and horse riding and racing reach the largest share of viewers while fishing records the highest proportion of participants. Additionally, the majority of males prefer watching sports games rather than participate in, except for fishing with reverse pattern.

Football and horse riding and racing attract the highest percentage of viewers and register a significant distribution pattern of. These two sports all record around 45% audiences while the figure for participants is much lower, with 10% and nearly a fifth, respectively.

Rugby, Basketball and Badminton all have more viewers than participants, whereas fishing witnesses a reverse pattern. A third of males aged 16-25 watch rugby while just 20% of those actually join in this sport. Similarly, there are roughly 40% males watch basketball, nearly 15% higher than the participants. Badminton, which the proportion of audiences and contestant are not much disproportionate, with about a third and a fourth, respectively.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

participants: 4

proportion: 3

sports: 3

viewers: 3

while: 3

fishing: 3

males: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and making relevant comparisons between watching and participating. The overview is clear and highlights the key exceptions, such as fishing. To improve, ensure more precise grammatical structures, particularly in the final paragraph where some sentence constructions are slightly fragmented. Additionally, minor refinements in word choice (e.g., using 'participants' instead of 'contestants' for sports like badminton) would enhance the academic tone.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, with an introduction, an overview, and two body paragraphs that group the data effectively. However, the flow is occasionally interrupted by awkward phrasing and grammatical slips. To improve, ensure that transitions between sentences are smoother and that the relationship between ideas is expressed more clearly. For example, the phrase 'with reverse pattern' in the overview is a bit abrupt; using 'exhibiting an opposite trend' would enhance the cohesion.

Lexical Resource

You have attempted to use a variety of terms to describe the data, such as 'proportion', 'share', and 'witnesses'. However, there are several instances of imprecise word choices and awkward collocations, such as 'significant distribution pattern of' (which is incomplete) and 'contestant' (which is better suited for a competition than a general sport participant). Aim to use more natural academic collocations, such as 'participation rates' or 'spectator figures', to improve the sophistication of your vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'male aged' should be 'males aged'), missing verbs (e.g., 'Badminton, which the proportion... are not much disproportionate' is a fragment), and awkward prepositional usage. Pay close attention to sentence completeness and ensure that every clause has a clear subject and a functioning verb. Practicing the use of relative clauses and ensuring correct noun-number agreement will help raise this score.

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