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Band 5+: The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image shows UK 1970: 35%, 2005: 60%; USA 1970: 37%, 2005: 58%; Canada 1970: 40%, 2005: 60%; Japan 1970: 19%, 2005: 40%; Germany 1970: 28%, 2005: 55%.

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To commence, the bar chart depicts, in 1970 and 2005 female students wanted to go to for higher education.

Overall, all countries reached a high level in this bar chart in 2005. Eventually, Japan reached the lowest percentage in the year 1970.

In 1970, the percentage of female pupils in UK was 35%, it gradually rocketed to 60% in 2005. Additionally, women travelling to other nation for higher education from USA is two a fifth percent in 1970, then its reach almost high percentage of this chart in the year is known as 2005. Moreover, Canada do not have any changes from starting to ending in both years.

Similarly, Japan has to resist their country do not reach top , it appears in the bar chart in between 1970 to 2005 . Thus, Germany maintain their legacy from start to end morethen half of percent in 1970 and 57% in 2005.

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The report provides a good overview of the data, but some details are missing or inaccurate. The report could be improved by providing more specific information about the changes in each country.

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The report is generally coherent, but the flow of ideas is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The report could be improved by using more cohesive devices and structuring the paragraphs more logically.

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