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Band 5+: The graphs below show changes in the steel industry in the UK between 1970 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphs. The first graph shows UK steel demand in million tonnes from 1970 to 2000. In 1970: Total demand ~15, UK production ~13, imports ~2. 1975: Total ~16, UK production ~11, imports ~5. 1980: Total ~14, UK production ~10, imports ~4. 1985: Total ~11, UK production ~8, imports ~3. 1990: Total ~12, UK production ~7, imports ~5. 1995: Total ~11, UK production ~6, imports ~5. 2000: Total ~13, UK production ~7, imports ~6. The second graph depicts UK steel industry employment in thousands from 1970 to 2000. 1970: ~190. 1975: ~160. 1980: ~110. 1985: ~80. 1990: ~50. 1995: ~35. 2000: ~20.
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The given graphs compared the UK demand for steel and the numbers employed in UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000. There are have three categories, namely a total UK demand, UK production, and imports in the UK demand for steel.

At the first graph, a total UK demand started at 20 millions tonens between 1970 and 1980 followed by a remained stable for 10 years. From 1990 to 2000, a figure of total UK demand increased approximately, at 14 millions tonens. The second figure of UK production started approximately at 17 millions tonens in 1970. Then, it has considerably been leveled off between 1980 and 2000. The last figure of imports started at 0 in 1970 followed by a significant improve for 30 years, accounting for 6 millions tonens.

Regarding the number employed in UK steel industry experienced significantly a decrease for 10 years, but in 1980 it sharply felt. After, between 1980 and 2000 it steadily declined approximately, at 48 millions tonens.

Overall, a total UK demand is becoming remained constant experienced a small decrease. The figure of UK production is declined between 1970 and 2000. An imports has been climbed for 30 years. Regarding the number employed in UK steel industry, it has felt during the full period.

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Overall Band Score

5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
demand: 6
between: 5
millions: 5
steel: 4
total: 4
years: 4
figure: 4
employed: 3
industry: 3
production: 3
imports: 3
started: 3
tonens: 3
approximately: 3
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Task Response

6
The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the graphs and ensure that your descriptions are clear and precise. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure to enhance readability.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by inaccuracies and a lack of clear connections between ideas. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related information. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on creating clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs, ensuring that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, double-check the accuracy of the data presented to avoid misleading the reader.

Lexical Resource

5
The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice ('improve' instead of 'increase,' 'felt' instead of 'fell'). There is also some awkward phrasing. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider variety of synonyms and more precise vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., 'fluctuated,' 'plummeted,' 'gradual increase'). Pay attention to using the correct form of words and collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('There are have'), subject-verb agreement issues ('a total UK demand started'), and misuse of articles ('at the first graph'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, including verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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