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Band 5+: The graphs below show information about citizenship in the UK. Summarise the ìnormation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a line graph and a bar chart. The line graph displays UK citizenship grants in thousands from 1962 to 2002, showing 1962 at 100, 1970 at approximately 60, 1980 at roughly 70, a spike reaching around 115 in 1985, decreasing to about 50 in 1990, slightly increasing in the mid-1990s, and sharply rising to 125 by 2002. The bar chart compares the origin of new citizens in 1996 and 2002, showing in 1996: European Community (EC) countries at 27, African nations and Asia (combined) at 39, and Australia/Others at 19; in 2002, the chart indicates European Community (EC) countries at 14, African nations and Asia (combined) at 50, and Australia/Others at 37.

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The graphs illustrate the number of people granted UK citizenship from 1962 to 2002 and their countries of origin.

Overall, the general trend was of an increase, with the most especially noticeable change in 2002. Turning to Additionally, / It is also worth noticing that among all the origin of those immigrants, Asians contributed the greatest share.

In 1962, approximately 30 thousand people were legally accepted as UK citizens. Afterwards,the number of foreigners immigrating into the UK had a gradual upward trend before the decline in the final of 1980s and hitting a trough of only 40 thousand people in the end of 20th century. A decade later, the immigrations recorded the peak in 2000 and started increasing gradually.

Regarding where they originated, in 1996 the Asian made up the largest proportion, about one-third of the whole population. The figure was higher than the ones for Europeans, Americans and Africans combined, which occupied equally 9 thousand people. Australasians and others just showed up as a tiny minority.

Until 2002, the number of immigrants had been increasing significantly. Asians consistently recorded the highest figures among 4 original nations, accounting for five-seventh of all. It was followed by Africans and Europeans combined with Americans, with 39 thousand and 27 thousand people given UK citizenship respectively. Afterall, Australasia and others were the only nations that decreased, 1 thousand less than the past one in 1996.

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The report attempts to address the task but suffers from significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. There are several instances where the reported figures contradict the visual description (e.g., stating 30 thousand in 1962 when the data suggests 100, or claiming a peak in 2000). Additionally, the report introduces categories not present in the visual description, such as 'Americans', which makes the summary confusing. To improve, ensure that every number mentioned is directly supported by the provided data and avoid inventing new categories. Focus on grouping the information logically and ensuring the overview accurately reflects the main trends shown in the graphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The coherence and cohesion of the report are significantly hindered by several issues. There are fragmented sentences and awkward transitions, such as 'Turning to Additionally, / It is also worth noticing that', which appear to be unfinished or poorly edited thoughts. The logical flow between paragraphs is sometimes disrupted by these structural errors. To improve, ensure that every sentence is complete and that cohesive devices (like 'In addition', 'Furthermore', or 'In contrast') are used naturally to link ideas rather than being inserted as disjointed fragments. Aim for a smoother progression from the overview to the specific details.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and, in several instances, inaccurate or used in an unnatural way. For example, terms like 'the Asian' or 'the immigrations' are used incorrectly (it should be 'Asians' or 'immigration'). There are also instances where the word choice does not fit the context, such as 'the final of 1980s' or 'the ones for Europeans'. To improve, focus on learning collocations related to data description (e.g., 'reached a peak', 'accounted for a proportion') and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used with correct grammatical agreement.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a variety of grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. There are issues with article usage (e.g., 'the Asian', 'the immigrations'), preposition errors (e.g., 'in the end of 20th century'), and sentence structure. Some sentences are overly complex but fail to maintain grammatical integrity. To improve, practice using a wider range of complex structures while ensuring accuracy in basic areas like subject-verb agreement, pluralization, and the correct use of definite/indefinite articles. Pay close attention to tense consistency when describing historical data.

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