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Band 5+: The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used in the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. summarise the information making conversation where relevant

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The image contains two pie charts detailing household energy usage and greenhouse gas production percentages in Australia. Household energy usage: cooling 3%, standby 3%, lighting 11%, refrigeration 12%, heating and cooling 20%, other appliances 24%, water heating 23%. Greenhouse gas production: cooking 4%, standby 3%, lighting 8%, refrigeration 7%, heating and cooling 38%, other appliances 16%, water heating 25%.

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The chart illustrate the data aboout the energy consumption ratio of household and ratio of greenhouse gas production for that reason in Australia.

Overall, it is clearly seen that though most of the domestic energy were consumed by other appliances, the gas production rate was higher for heating and clothing.

The production of greenhouse gas was higher for heating and clothing and it was about 30% though its usage rate was only 20%. however the energy consumption rate for water heating and other appliances were almost similar to a significant difference can be seen in gas production rate. where water heating production rate was 11% higher than the other appliances.

Furthermore, lighting and refrigeration also had neally similar consumption rate. As a matter of fact, these sectors also reached same amount of gas and it was 7%. The modarate usage were seen in both cooking and stand by (5%) where their production rate for gas were also similar which were 3 to 4%.

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heating: 4

energy: 3

consumption: 3

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higher: 3

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization is present, but the language could be more precise. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using more specific language, and ensuring clear comparisons between the two charts.

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the connections between sentences and ideas could be stronger. The introduction is weak and lacks a clear thesis statement. The body paragraphs present data but lack a clear structure and flow. Use cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the information. Consider using topic sentences to introduce the main point of each paragraph and transition words to link ideas between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "clothing" instead of "heating"). Expand your vocabulary related to energy consumption and environmental impact. Use more specific and descriptive language to convey the data accurately. For example, instead of 'higher,' use 'significantly higher' or 'substantially greater' to show the magnitude of the difference.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, "The chart illustrate" should be "The chart illustrates," and "gas production rate was higher for heating and clothing" should be "greenhouse gas production was higher for heating." Proofread carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures to improve the complexity and clarity of your writing.

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