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Band 4+: The graphs below show the percentage of people holding full driving licenses in Great Britain by age and sex. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays percentages of full car driving license holders in Great Britain by sex and age for the years 1975/76 and 2006. For men in 1975/76: 70 and over (20%), 60-69 (50%), 50-59 (70%), 40-49 (80%), 30-39 (80%), 21-29 (60%), 17-20 (20%); in 2006: 70 and over (60%), 60-69 (80%), 50-59 (90%), 40-49 (90%), 30-39 (90%), 21-29 (80%), 17-20 (40%). For women in 1975/76: 70 and over (5%), 60-69 (20%), 50-59 (30%), 40-49 (40%), 30-39 (40%), 21-29 (40%), 17-20 (20%); in 2006: 70 and over (40%), 60-69 (60%), 50-59 (80%), 40-49 (80%), 30-39 (80%), 21-29 (70%), 17-20 (40%).

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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of individuals r having accurate driving licences in Great Britain by age group and gender.

Overall, Men have the largest portion for holding car driving licence; Where, Women have the lowest portion. Women driving licences proportion steadily increased than recent years.

Firstly, Men historically have highest range of 50-59 age group (with 85%); However, age group of 70 and over have lowest range who holds licences (with 27%). Age group of 30-39 remained almost similar form 1975 to 2006. Men with 70 and above was 37% in 1975/76, which raise more than its half portion in 2006.

Secondly, Women proportion has dominated in 2006 than 1975/76, which increased with 79% and 5%, Respectively. Women of age group of 70 and over increased with around 30% in 2006, Followed by age group 60-69 increased with around 67%, Followed by age group of 50-59 increased with about 73%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

group: 7

increased: 5

women: 4

proportion: 3

driving: 3

licences: 3

portion: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the main features and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., '85%' for men aged 50-59, '27%' for men aged 70+, '37%' for men 70+ in 1975/76, '79%' and '5%' for women overall) and some unclear phrasing (e.g., 'individuals r having', 'Women driving licences proportion steadily increased than recent years'). The overall structure is present, but the inclusion of inaccurate information detracts from task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the key trends and comparisons, and ensure clarity in expression.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and some comparisons, but the overall structure is unclear and the message is difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is limited and often incorrect (e.g., 'Where,' 'Firstly,' 'Secondly'). Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the progression of ideas is disjointed. To improve, focus on creating a clear overall structure with a distinct introduction, an overview paragraph, and logically ordered body paragraphs. Use a range of cohesive devices accurately to link ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'portion,' 'range,' 'increased'). There are several inappropriate word choices and errors (e.g., 'individuals r having,' 'largest portion for holding,' 'steadily increased than recent years'). The range of vocabulary is insufficient for the task. To improve, learn and use a wider range of precise vocabulary related to describing data, such as 'proportion,' 'percentage,' 'figure,' 'peak,' 'decline,' 'surge,' 'remain stable,' and 'outnumber.' Ensure words are used in the correct context and with accurate collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly hinder understanding. These include incorrect verb forms ('r having,' 'raise'), subject-verb agreement issues ('Men have,' 'Women proportion has'), incorrect use of articles and prepositions, and faulty sentence structures. Punctuation is also frequently misused (e.g., capital letters in the middle of sentences, incorrect use of semicolons). To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, verb tenses, and subject-verb agreement. Practice writing simple, clear sentences before attempting more complex ones. Proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors.

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