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Band 8+: The graphs below summarise the results of a survey carried out by the Department of Health about the overweight population in Britain with projections. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two bar charts. Chart 1: Obese people in the UK (aged 16+) in millions with Men data: 2003: 6, 2010 (projected): 7, and Women data: 2003: 5.5, 2010 (projected): 6. Chart 2: Obese children in the UK (aged 2-15) in thousands with Boys data: 2003: 700, 2010 (projected): 800, and Girls data: 2003: 600, 2010 (projected): 800.

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The bar charts illustrate the estimated number of obese adults and children in the UK in 2003 and 2010.

Overall, obesity levels increased in all groups over the period. Adults recorded higher figures than children, and men and boys showed slightly higher numbers than women and girls.

In terms of adults, the number of obese men rose significantly from about 4 million in 2003 to approximately 6.5 million in 2010. Similarly, the figure for women increased from around 5 million to about 6 million, although the growth was less dramatic compared to men.

Looking at children, a similar upward trend can be observed. The number of obese boys grew from roughly 700 thousand in 2003 to around 800 thousand in 2010. Meanwhile, the figure for girls increased more noticeably, from approximately 650 thousand to about 900 thousand, making them the highest among children in 2010.

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The report covers the main features of the charts and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that the number of obese men rose from about 4 million in 2003, but the chart shows 6 million. Also, the report mentions that the figure for girls increased to about 900 thousand in 2010, but the chart shows 800 thousand. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate and consistent with the information presented in the charts. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are accurate throughout the report, contributing to the clarity and precision of the writing. The grammatical accuracy enhances the overall quality and credibility of the report.

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Band 8+: The graphs below summarise the results of a survey carried out by the Department of Health about the overweight population in Britain with projections. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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