Process Diagram

Band 6+: The image below shows the different stages involved in making paper. Write a 150-word report explaining the information given below.

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The image depicts the paper-making process starting from timber; first, timber is transported and undergoes de-barking using a de-barking machine, followed by chipping in a chipping machine, then it proceeds to either mechanical pulping, chemical pulping, or is processed via a hydrapulper, before advancing to screening and cleaning, and finally arriving at the paper making machine to produce paper.

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The diagram illustrates the various steps needed to produce paper.

There are three distinct stages: wood processing; pulping and finally the creation of the final paper itself.

First of all trees are extracted and felled by means of a bulldozer. After that, the timber is sent for a de-barking in a building specially designed for that purpose. Once the bark has been removed, the wood is placed in a chipping machine to be broken down into smaller fragments. The second stage, pulping, can be done mechanically, chemically or using a hydrapulper.

The final stage is where the pulp is screened and cleaned ready to be introduced into the paper making machine where the final product is produced.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the paper-making process, covering the key stages from timber to the final product. The organization into three distinct stages (wood processing, pulping, and paper creation) is clear and logical. The description of each stage is generally accurate and relevant. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the screening and cleaning process, and perhaps mentioning the transportation of timber at the beginning. Also, avoid mentioning specific tools like 'bulldozer' if not explicitly stated in the visual. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The stages of paper production are logically presented. However, the transitions between some sentences could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. For example, elaborating slightly on how each stage connects to the next would improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with specific terms like 'de-barking,' 'chipping machine,' and 'hydrapulper' accurately incorporated. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider using a wider range of synonyms or more descriptive adjectives to add depth to the descriptions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures and punctuation. While there are a few minor errors, they do not significantly impede understanding. Reviewing and correcting these small errors would further improve the grammatical accuracy.

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