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Band 6+: The line graph above shows the number of international tourists (in millions) visiting three countries between 2010 and 2020.

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The image presents a line graph of international tourist arrivals (in millions) for three countries from 2010 to 2020. The 2010 and 2020 arrivals were, respectively: Country A, approximately 20 and 32; Country B, approximately 15 and 28; and Country C, approximately 9 and 27.

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The line graph illustrates the number of international tourists in terms of millions visiting three different countries over a 10 year period from 2010 to 2020.

Overall, while the rate of growth varied, the figures for all countries increased by the end of the period. The country A remained the leader.

In 2010, the number of tourists for country A stood at 20 million, while the country B started the period with approximately 15 million of visitors. Then, the country A followed by a significant increase to 34 million of tourists by 2018. Concurrently, the country B experienced a substantial growth, reaching 31 million of people. At the end of the period, both of them experienced a slight decline.

In comparison, the country C had 10 million of tourists by 2010. Subsequently, it climbed dramatically until 28 million of tourist at the final year.

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country: 6

million: 6

tourists: 4

period: 4

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the overall trend and providing specific data for each country. The structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Country A reaching 34 million in 2018, Country C starting at 10 million) and minor omissions (e.g., not mentioning the exact 2020 figures for all countries). To improve, ensure data points are as accurate as possible and consider including a brief comparison of the final values. The language is generally appropriate, but watch for article usage (e.g., 'the country A' should be 'Country A'). The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and a detailed description. However, the cohesion could be improved. The use of 'Then' and 'Concurrently' is somewhat mechanical, and the paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to separate the trends of different countries more clearly. The final sentence of the second paragraph is a bit abrupt. Consider using a wider range of linking devices and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'illustrates', 'stood at', 'experienced a substantial growth', 'climbed dramatically'). However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'country A', 'country B', 'country C' used repeatedly) and a few inaccuracies (e.g., 'the country A', 'the country B', 'the country C' - the definite article is not needed here). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms for 'country' (e.g., 'nation', 'destination') and ensure articles are used correctly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and phrasing issues. For example, 'the country A remained the leader' should be 'Country A remained the leader'. 'The country A followed by a significant increase' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'Country A then saw a significant increase'. 'Both of them experienced a slight decline' is acceptable but could be more precise. 'Until 28 million of tourist' should be 'to 28 million tourists'. Punctuation is generally correct. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and prepositions.

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