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Band 4+: The line graph below gives information about how much each country made out of car export sales from 1996 to 2004.

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The image shows the "Consumption of spreads" graph indicating data from 1986 to 2007: Margarine: 1986: 90, 1991: 100, 1996: 100, 2001: 80, 2007: 70; Low fat & reduced spreads: 1986: 20, 1991: 40, 1996: 50, 2001: 80, 2007: 50; Butter: 1986: 140, 1991: 120, 1996: 90, 2001: 60, 2007: 50.

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This diagram illustrates correlation between using margarine, low fat and butter in grams for 20 years from 1986 to 2007.

Butter using peaked in 1986 and showed usage of 160 grams, while margarine usage was twice lower. Both graphs crossed in 1991 with 100 grams each, then margarine usage showed a plateau for next five years. Butter usage decreased slightly from 1991 to 2007, showed approximately 50 grams, hovewer margarine usage also decreased slowly to 40 grams in 2007. Graphs crossed again in 2005 with about 55 grams.

Low fat and reduced spreads increased significantly from 1996 to 2001, peaked at 80 grams, then also decreased slightly to 70 grams in 2007.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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grams: 7

usage: 5

margarine: 4

showed: 3

decreased: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides a clear overview of the data presented. It successfully identifies the key points, such as the peak in butter consumption and the fluctuations in margarine and low-fat spreads. To improve, ensure that the introductory sentence accurately reflects the subject matter (the report mentions 'correlation' which is not quite the same as 'consumption trends') and maintain consistent grammatical accuracy, particularly with word choices like 'Butter using' instead of 'Butter usage'. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information, but the progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and the transition between discussing different types of spreads is abrupt. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and use a wider variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Following this period') to guide the reader through the trends. Additionally, the grouping of data could be more logical to allow for better comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and occasionally inaccurate. For example, 'Butter using peaked' and 'margarine usage was twice lower' are awkward phrasings. There is also a misuse of the word 'correlation,' which implies a statistical relationship that isn't necessarily being described here. Aim to use more precise academic verbs and nouns, such as 'consumption,' 'depletion,' 'fluctuation,' or 'stability,' and ensure that comparative structures (e.g., 'half as much as') are used correctly. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that impact the clarity of the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement, incorrect word forms (e.g., 'Butter using'), and punctuation errors (e.g., 'hovewer'). Sentence structures are mostly simple or contain errors when attempting complexity. To improve, focus on mastering complex sentence structures using relative clauses and subordinating conjunctions, and ensure that tense consistency is maintained throughout the description of the timeline.

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