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Band 7+: The line graph below gives information about the price of banas in four different countries between 1995 and 2004.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Visitor Number', showing the number of 'Visitors' on the y-axis (0-1600) against 'Time (o'clock)' on the x-axis. For Summer, the number of visitors at each hour were: 9:00 (0), 10:00 (850), 11:00 (1250), 12:00 (1480), 13:00 (1200), 14:00 (1050), 15:00 (900), 16:00 (800), 17:00 (400), and 18:00 (0). For Winter, the visitor numbers were: 9:00 (0), 10:00 (400), 11:00 (350), 12:00 (580), 13:00 (450), 14:00 (250), and 0 for the hours of 15:00, 16:00, 17:00, and 18:00.

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The line graph illustrates the average number of visitors to a museum over an 18-hour period, during summer and winter in 2003. Overall, although both seasons followed a similar pattern, the number of visitors in summer was significantly higher than in winter.

While the number of visitors in both seasons stood at 0 people at the beginning of the day, in the summer figures rose dramatically until 12 o’clock, reaching a peak of more than 1400 people. However, the number then decreased steadily towards the end of the day, reaching the same pattern as the starting point.

Meanwhile, in winter, there was a sharp growth until 10 o’clock, continued by a slight fall for a following hour. Next, the number of visitors recovered again, reaching a high of 600 people, but then the number declined considerably for the following three hours, reaching 0 people in 15 o’clock, which remained unchanged until the end of the period.

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number: 6

visitors: 4

people: 4

reaching: 4

summer: 3

until: 3

o'clock: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and differences in visitor numbers between summer and winter. The description of the summer visitor pattern is well-detailed, including the peak and the overall trend. The winter visitor pattern is also described, although the specific times and numbers could be more precise. To improve, include more specific data points for the winter months and ensure all key features are mentioned.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overall structure, with an introduction, body paragraphs detailing each season, and a concluding statement, is effective. Transitions between sentences and ideas are mostly smooth, contributing to the coherence of the report. To further improve, consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow and connection between ideas. For example, you could use more conjunctions, pronouns, or lexical links to create a stronger sense of unity within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using appropriate terms to describe trends and quantities. Words like 'dramatically,' 'steadily,' 'sharp growth,' and 'declined considerably' are effective in conveying the information. To enhance the lexical resource, try incorporating more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to graph analysis. For instance, instead of 'reaching a peak,' you could use 'culminating' or 'peaking.' Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider vocabulary range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used effectively. There are only minor grammatical errors, and these do not impede understanding. To further improve, pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct tense usage. Reviewing and editing the report carefully can help identify and correct these minor errors, leading to greater grammatical accuracy.

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