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Band 5+: The line graph below gives information about the price of banas in four different countries between 1995 and 2004.

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The image displays a line graph titled 'Visitor Number', showing the number of 'Visitors' on the y-axis (0-1600) against 'Time (o'clock)' on the x-axis. For Summer, the number of visitors at each hour were: 9:00 (0), 10:00 (850), 11:00 (1250), 12:00 (1480), 13:00 (1200), 14:00 (1050), 15:00 (900), 16:00 (800), 17:00 (400), and 18:00 (0). For Winter, the visitor numbers were: 9:00 (0), 10:00 (400), 11:00 (350), 12:00 (580), 13:00 (450), 14:00 (250), and 0 for the hours of 15:00, 16:00, 17:00, and 18:00.

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The graph illustrates the average number of visitors entering a museum throughout the day, during summer and winter in 2003.

Overall, it is evident that the average number of visitors entering a museum, during summer increased steadily reaching a peak before declining gradually across the day. Whereas, the average number of visitors entering a museum during winter fluctuated slightly reaching a peak before decreased considerably. Thereafter, it remained stable until the final year.

At 0 o’clock, the average number of visitors entering a museum during winter stood at almost 150 visitors followed by the average number of visitors entering a museum during summer at 0 visitor. From 0 to 12 o’clock, the average number of visitors entering a museum during summer grew significantly reaching a peak of around 15000 visitors. Meanwhile, the average number of visitors entering a museum during winter fluctuated moderately reaching a peak of 400 visitors.

At 12 o’clock, the average number of visitors entering a museum during summer declined gradually to 0 visitor by the end of the period. On the other hand, the average number of visitors entering a museum during winter decreased dramatically to 0 visitor before remaining unchanged until the final year.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

visitors: 11

average: 9

number: 9

entering: 9

museum: 9

during: 9

summer: 5

winter: 5

reaching: 4

before: 3

o'clock: 3

visitor: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the graph but contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. The data points mentioned (e.g., 15000 visitors, 0 o'clock) do not match the visual description. The report also misinterprets the time scale and trends. Focus on accurately summarizing the main trends and key features without fabricating data. Ensure that the overview captures the most prominent patterns, such as the peak times and differences between summer and winter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and overview, but the paragraphing could be improved. The second paragraph attempts to summarize trends, but the phrasing is somewhat repetitive and the final sentence is confusing. The third and fourth paragraphs present detailed data, but the repetition of 'the average number of visitors entering a museum' makes the text cumbersome. Use more varied referencing and ensure logical flow between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited and repetitive. Phrases like 'the average number of visitors entering a museum' are overused. There is some attempt at variation (e.g., 'increased steadily', 'declining gradually', 'fluctuated slightly'), but the range is narrow. To improve, use synonyms and more precise terms (e.g., 'attendance', 'figures', 'rose', 'peaked', 'dropped'). Avoid informal language like 'o'clock' in a formal report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'before decreased considerably' should be 'before decreasing considerably'; 'at 0 visitor' should be 'at 0 visitors'; 'grew significantly reaching a peak of around 15000 visitors' is likely inaccurate and should be 'reaching a peak of around 1500 visitors' based on the visual. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Use a wider range of sentence structures and proofread carefully.

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