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Band 5+: The line graph below showes the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

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The image displays a line graph with five lines representing the percentage of tourists to England who visited different attractions in Brighton over a 30-year span from 1980 to 2010. Art Gallery starts at approximately 15% in 1980, peaks at 35% in 1995, and ends at 25% in 2010. Pavilion begins at nearly 30% in 1980, dips to 20% in 1985, rises to nearly 50% in 1995, and concludes at roughly 45% in 2010. Pier starts at 10% in 1980, climbs to around 35% in 1985, then decreases to 20% in 1995, and finishes at 10% in 2010. Pier shows a consistently increasing trend from 5% in 1980 to 10% in 1985, 15% in 1990, 20% in 1995, 30% in 2005, and ending at 35% in 2010. Festival fluctuates starting at nearly 40%, descending to 10% in 1985, ascending to over 30% in 1995, then decreasing again to 25% in 2005, and finally reaching 30% in 2010.

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This line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who visited Brighton attractions. Overall, the percentage of Pavillion peaked in 1995 unlike others.

On the one hand, the Pier and the Festival moved slightly their progress. On the other hand, the Art Gallery and the Pavillion shifted dramatically their progress.

The Pier started at ten percentage in 1980 but ultimately it rose over twenty percentage in 2010. The art gallery initially was over twenty percentage and then it fluctuated nearly third-quarters between 1980 and 1990. Ultimately it significantly downed to under 10 percentage in 2010. The Pavillion began around mid proportion in 1980 and it obviously surged the nearest at the top of attractions in 1995 and suddenly dropped to thirty percent in 2010. However the Festival showed slightly changes from 1980 to 2010.

In conclusion, these attractions demonstrated that apart from the Pier, the percentage of others attractions decreased in the last year, 2010.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for the Festival is not described in detail, and the Art Gallery's figures are misreported (e.g., starting at 'over twenty percentage' and ending 'under 10 percentage' are incorrect). The trend descriptions are vague and sometimes unclear (e.g., 'moved slightly their progress'). To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and use clearer, more precise language to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion, but the organization of information is somewhat confusing. The grouping of attractions (Pier and Festival vs. Art Gallery and Pavilion) is not logical, and the progression of ideas within paragraphs is not always smooth. Cohesive devices are used but sometimes inaccurately (e.g., 'On the one hand... On the other hand' is used without a clear contrast). The conclusion is present but does not effectively summarize the main trends. To improve, organize the report by clear trends (e.g., attractions that increased, decreased, or fluctuated) and use a range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'illustrates', 'peaked', 'surged', 'fluctuated'), but there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings (e.g., 'moved slightly their progress', 'shifted dramatically their progress', 'downed', 'mid proportion'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are used incorrectly. To improve, use a wider range of precise verbs and nouns (e.g., 'rose steadily', 'experienced a decline', 'remained stable') and ensure correct collocations. Avoid informal or invented words like 'downed'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. There are problems with subject-verb agreement, word order, and sentence structure (e.g., 'the Pier and the Festival moved slightly their progress' should be 'the Pier and the Festival showed slight changes in their progress'). Articles are often missing or misused, and some sentences are incomplete or run-on. To improve, focus on writing clear, grammatically correct sentences, and proofread to correct errors. Use a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, but ensure they are accurate.

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