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Band 5+: The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph showing the average monthly temperatures (in Celsius) for Paris, Dubai, and Sydney. Paris temperatures: Jan 5, Feb 7, Mar 10, Apr 13, May 17, Jun 20, Jul 22, Aug 21, Sep 19, Oct 14, Nov 9, Dec 6. Dubai temperatures: Jan 20, Feb 22, Mar 25, Apr 28, May 32, Jun 35, Jul 37, Aug 36, Sep 33, Oct 29, Nov 25, Dec 21. Sydney temperatures: Jan 23, Feb 23, Mar 22, Apr 20, May 17, Jun 15, Jul 14, Aug 15, Sep 17, Oct 18, Nov 20, Dec 22.

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The shown graph gives information about the average monthly temperatures in Celsius from January to December in Paris, Dubai and Sydney.

Overall, among three major cities the lowest temperature belongs to Paris and the highest temperature belongs to Dubai. On the other hand, the average temperature is in Sydney.

In January the least temperature with 5 degrees Celsius is in Paris and this number is repeated in December for it. İn march of the year the temperature about 23 degrees Celsius crosses in the cities of Paris and Sydney. Also, there is crossings with nearly 16 degrees Celsius in September for Paris and Sydney and with approximately 22 degrees Celsius in Dubai and Sydney. In Sydney the lowest temperature is in July and the peakest one is both in January and in December. In Dubai the temperature has increased slowly rom January to August and then has decreased drammatically from August to December. In Paris the temperature with 20 degrees Celsius is the same in July and August.

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temperature: 8

celsius: 6

paris: 6

degrees: 5

january: 4

december: 4

dubai: 4

sydney: 4

august: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the graph, but lacks specific details and comparisons between the cities. The writer could have provided more information about the temperature patterns in each city and made more relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is divided into paragraphs, but the connections between the sentences are not always clear. The writer could have used more cohesive devices to link the ideas together.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g. 'peakest'). The writer could have used more precise and varied vocabulary to describe the temperature patterns.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors throughout the report, such as subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect use of prepositions. The writer could have used a wider range of sentence structures and more accurate grammar.

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