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Band 7+: The line graph below shows the percentage of Internet users by population in the USA, Canada and Mexico between 1999 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts internet users as a percentage of the population from 1999 to 2009: In 1999, USA at 20%, Canada at 10%, and Mexico at 5%. By 2001, USA at 40%, Canada at 30%, and Mexico at 10%. By 2003, USA and Canada both at 60%, Mexico at 25%. By 2005, USA at 70%, Canada at 80%, and Mexico at 30%. By 2007, USA at 70%, Canada at 95%, and Mexico at 40%. By 2009, USA at 80%, Canada at 100%, and Mexico at 40%.

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the populace from 3 countries (the USA, Canada, and Mexico) that made use of the internet from 1999 to 2009.

Overall, the percentage of the people who surfed the internet increased over the given period. Canada had the highest share of people who used the internet, followed by the USA. Mexico had the lowest proportion of internet users.

In 1999, USA was the country with highest percentage of people who used the internet, standing at about 20% of the pooulation whereas only about 5 to 6% of the populace in USA and Mexico respectively employed the use of web.

By the middle of the period,the proportion of Canadian and American users had risen significantly with Canada finishing as the country with 100% of its citizen end of the period. This was closely followed by the USA finishing at nearly 90%. By the end of the period, about 40% of the Mexicns were using the internet.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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internet: 6

proportion: 3

canada: 3

people: 3

period: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., USA finishing at nearly 90%). To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary your language to describe trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a clear overview and identifies the main trends in internet usage across the three countries. The structure is generally logical, with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, cohesion could be improved by using more varied linking words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs. For instance, in the third paragraph, the transition to discussing the USA and Mexico could be smoother. Also, check for typos ('pooulation', 'Mexicns') as they affect readability.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to describing trends and proportions. Terms like 'proportion,' 'populace,' 'share,' and 'standing at' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary to describe the rate of change (e.g., 'rapidly increased,' 'gradual growth') and the final values (e.g., 'reached a peak,' 'plateaued').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, with a mix of simple and complex sentences. However, there are some grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, in the third paragraph, 'only about 5 to 6% of the populace in USA and Mexico respectively employed the use of web' is awkward and contains an inaccuracy (Mexico, not USA). Also, 'Canada finishing as the country with 100% of its citizen end of the period' needs correction. Proofreading carefully for subject-verb agreement, correct preposition usage, and accurate reporting of data is essential.

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