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Band 4+: The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line graph illustrating tourist percentages visiting four Edinburgh attractions from 1980 to 2010. For the Aquarium: 1980: 20%, 1985: 25%, 1990: 35%, 1995: 40%, 2000: 30%, 2005: 22%, 2010: 20%. For the Castle: 1980: 24%, 1985: 33%, 1990: 38%, 1995 peak: 45%, 2000: 35%, 2005: 38%, 2010: 34%. For the Zoo: 1980: 28%, 1985: 20%, 1990: 15%, 1995: 10%, 2000: 10%, 2005: 12%, 2010: 10%. For the Festival: 1980: 30%, 1985: 27%, 1990: 30%, 1995: 27%, 2000: 25%, 2005: 22%, 2010: 22%.

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The line graph gives information about rate of guests on Scotland who travelled to various attractions .

Overall , most tourists who visited attractions Pavilion and Pier showed an upward trend , while the reverse was true for Festival and Art Gallery over the period .

Looking at the graph, we can see in 1980 at the beginning the rate of visitors in Pavilion saw 25 % . Following year the percentage of tourists in Pavilion saw a significant growth from 25 % to 50 % between 1980 and 1995 . However, there was a dramatic decrease from about 45 % to 30 % in 2000 and 2010. Meanwhile , according to the rate of tourists in Pier, it composed 10 % in 1980 at the beginning. The percentages of Pier experienced considerable fluctuation between 15 % and 10 % in 1985 and 1990 . Following year Pier showed significant rise from 12 % to 22 % in 2016 .

It is clear to see from graph that in 1980 rate of tourists in Festival accounted for 30 % , while index of Art Gallery made up about 25 % . Between 1980 and 2010 the percentages of visitors in Festival stayed constant at 30 % and 25 % showing no considerable change . At the same time rate of tourists in Art Gallery saw significant rise 20 % to 38 % between 1980 and 1985 . However, coming to 1990 there was dramatic decrease from 38 % to 20 %. Following year the quantity of visitors in Art Gallery went through a period of dramatic decrease to 0 % on 2010 falling below the figure for Pier which stood at 22 % .

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

tourists: 5

gallery: 4

between: 4

graph: 3

about: 3

pavilion: 3

festival: 3

visitors: 3

following: 3

significant: 3

dramatic: 3

decrease: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing trends over time, but it contains significant inaccuracies and irrelevant information. The student misidentifies the attractions (e.g., 'Pavilion and Pier' instead of Aquarium and Castle, 'Art Gallery' instead of Zoo) and provides incorrect data points (e.g., 50% for Pavilion, 0% for Art Gallery). The overall structure is present, but the inclusion of inaccurate material in key areas detracts from task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately identifying the data categories and reporting the main trends with correct figures, while avoiding invented details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to structure the information by discussing attractions in two groups, but the overall organization is unclear and the message is difficult to follow at times. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Following year', 'Meanwhile', 'It is clear to see from graph that'). Paragraphing is present but not skillfully managed, as the second paragraph mixes trends for different attractions without clear separation. To improve, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph, ensure logical progression of ideas, and employ a wider range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive (e.g., 'rate of tourists', 'saw a significant growth', 'dramatic decrease'). There are also inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., 'guests on Scotland', 'Pavilion and Pier' instead of the actual attractions, 'index of Art Gallery'). The range of lexical items is insufficient for a higher score. To improve, learn and use a wider variety of precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'peaked', 'fluctuated', 'remained stable'), and ensure correct terminology for the given data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity (e.g., 'rate of guests on Scotland', 'the rate of visitors in Pavilion saw 25%', 'the quantity of visitors in Art Gallery went through a period of dramatic decrease to 0%'). There is limited variety in sentence structures, with many sentences following a similar pattern. Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, practice using a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses), and proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors in subject-verb agreement, prepositions, and article usage.

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