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Band 6+: The line graph gives information about the usage of Facebook and Twitter.

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The image shows a line graph illustrating the average usage per person of Twitter and Facebook per week in Australia from 2012 to 2016. For Facebook, the number of times per week is 35 in 2012, dips to 25 in 2013, then slightly increases to 28 in 2014, rises to 32 in 2015, and peaks at 38 in 2016. For Twitter, the usage starts at 20 in 2012, decreases to 13 in 2013, remains stable at 13 in 2014, escalates significantly to 24 in 2015, and further increases to 34 in 2016.

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The shown line graph illustrates the information on the usage of Facebook and Twitter in Australia over the period between 2012 and 2016. The data is presented with amount of time in a week.

Overall, it can be seen that the amount of usage in Facebook and Twitter experienced significant growth over the years. It is noticeable that Facebook was more popular than Twitter for most of the period

As the graph provides, the usage of Facebook started at approximately 20 times a week in 2012 followed by an increase to around 30 times a week in 2014. The trend rose to around 35 times a week in 2016.

By contrast, the usage of Twitter, starting from about 25 times a week in 2012, declined to 10 times a week in 2014. At the end of the timeline, the usage of Twitter increased to 35 times a week in 2016.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

times: 6

usage: 5

twitter: 5

facebook: 4

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends for both Facebook and Twitter, and it includes an overview. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Facebook starting at 20 instead of 35, Twitter starting at 25 instead of 20, and the 2014 values are incorrect). The report also omits some specific data points and the description of the Twitter trend is incomplete (it does not mention the stability in 2013-2014 or the significant increase in 2015). To improve, ensure that all key data points are accurately reported and that the trends are described with more precision. Additionally, avoid vague phrases like 'around' when exact figures are available.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall' and 'By contrast' helps the reader follow the progression. However, the paragraphing could be improved by separating the details for Facebook and Twitter into distinct paragraphs for better clarity. Additionally, the final sentence of the overview is incomplete and could be integrated more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate and appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'experienced significant growth', 'declined'). However, there is limited range and some repetition (e.g., 'usage' and 'times a week' are used repeatedly). To improve, consider using synonyms and more precise terms such as 'frequency of use', 'per week', 'rose steadily', 'dropped sharply', and 'peaked at'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, including simple and complex sentences. However, there are several errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'The shown line graph' should be 'The line graph shown' or 'The given line graph'. Also, 'the amount of usage' is better expressed as 'the amount of time spent' or 'the frequency of use'. The sentence 'As the graph provides' is not idiomatic; consider 'As can be seen from the graph' or 'According to the graph'. Additionally, the overview sentence is incomplete ('It is noticeable that Facebook was more popular than Twitter for most of the period' lacks a concluding phrase). Proofreading for such issues would improve accuracy.

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