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Band 5+: The line graph shows the changes i. Population size, birth rate and a thread overy period of 1700 to 2000. Summarise information by selecting and reporting me features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a graph with two y-axes, showing population size (in millions) on the left and birth and death rate (per 1,000 people) on the right, plotted across a timeline from 1700 to 2000 on the x-axis. Three lines represent population size (dashed), birth rate (dotted), and death rate (solid). Population size starts at approximately 5 million in 1700, rises to just over 10 million around 1750, drops below 10 million by 1800, then climbs steadily to reach 30 million by 1850, around 40 million by 1900, and exceeds 50 million by 2000. Birth rate begins at about 30 per 1,000 people in 1700, fluctuates between 30 to just over 40 until 1850 where it peaks close to 50, then steeply declines to below 20 by 2000. Death rate starts just above 40 per 1,000 people in 1700, peaks at around 45 by 1750, drops to 20 by 1800, rises back to around 30 by 1850, and then falls to below 10 by 2000.

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The line graph illustrates the population and compares the birth and death rate in England and Wales in 300 years.

Overall, it can be seen that the population showed an upward trend over the time, while death and birth rate showed an downward trend with fluctuations.

It is evident that in 1700,the population size was 5 million, which doubles in 1750.then population remained stable for 50 years. In 1800, the population size drastically increased and reached to 50 million in 2000.

Regarding the given data, the birth and death rate showed same trend. The birth rate was 30 to 40 per person between 1700 to 1750, while death rate was around 27 to 37 per 1000 people. There was stability for 50 years, after which there was a sharp decline in both birth and death rates, around 20 people per 1000 in 1950. After that death rate remained stable for 50 years, while birth rate inclined to 35 per 1000 people in 2000.

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The report provides a good overview of the main trends in the graph, but it misses some key details and makes a few inaccuracies. The report could be improved by providing more specific data points and by focusing on the most significant changes in the data.

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4.5

The report is generally well-organized, but the flow of information is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The report could be improved by using more cohesive devices and by ensuring that sentences are grammatically correct.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some of the word choices are not precise or appropriate. The report could be improved by using more specific and accurate vocabulary.

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The report could be improved by paying more attention to grammar and punctuation.

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