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Band 7+: The line graph shows the temperature in three different places in 2000.

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The image displays a line chart, 'Average Monthly Temperature in 2020', with Temperature (°C) on the y-axis from 0 to 30 and Month on the x-axis. For Tokyo, the monthly temperatures were: Jan 5, Feb 6, Mar 10, Apr 15, May 20, Jun 25, Jul 29, Aug 28, Sep 24, Oct 18, Nov 12, and Dec 6. For London, the values were: Jan 4, Feb 5, Mar 7, Apr 10, May 13, Jun 15, Jul 17, Aug 16, Sep 14, Oct 10, Nov 7, and Dec 5. For Sydney, the temperatures were: Jan 22, Feb 22, Mar 20, Apr 17, May 14, Jun 12, Jul 12, Aug 13, Sep 15, Oct 17, Nov 19, and Dec 21.

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The line chart depicts the average monthly temperature in three capital cities during year 2020.

There was a significant increase of temperature in Tokyo and London, from approximately 5 ℃ in January and reach its peak in June. The highest temperature in Tokyo was around 27 ℃ and about 17 ℃ in London. Furthermore, both cities experienced a gradual decreased of temperatures until the end of the year.

On the other hand, the temperature changes in Sydney were the opposite of Tokyo and London. Starting from about 23 ℃ in January, this number began to decrease until reach the lowest temperature of approximately 12 ℃ in June. Later, the number started to level up to about 21 ℃ by the end of the year.

Overall, by the end of 2020, the temperature in Tokyo and London was going down until approximately 5 ℃, while the temperature in Sydney was raised.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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temperature: 7

tokyo: 4

london: 4

approximately: 3

about: 3

until: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and features of the graph. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., peak temperatures and months). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and consider including more specific details to support the overall trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, using paragraphing effectively to separate the descriptions of temperature trends in different cities. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are mostly smooth, contributing to a coherent flow of information. However, there's room for improvement in linking ideas more explicitly to enhance the overall coherence. For instance, using more varied cohesive devices could strengthen the connections between different observations and conclusions.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends in a line graph. Terms like 'significant increase,' 'peak,' 'gradual decrease,' and 'level up' are used appropriately. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary related to temperature changes and comparative descriptions. For example, instead of 'the temperature changes in Sydney were the opposite,' you could use 'exhibited an inverse trend' or 'presented a contrasting pattern.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar with a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. There are a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues, such as subject-verb agreement ('temperature changes in Sydney were') and awkward phrasing ('reach its peak in June'). Correcting these minor errors and refining sentence structures would improve the overall grammatical accuracy and clarity. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and ensure that sentences are grammatically sound.

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