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Band 5+: The local council has decided to destroy a building in your neighborhood. You disagree with this decision. Write a letter to the local councilor. In your letter Tell what building is going to be destroyed Explain why the building is useful for people Suggest how to improve the building

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Iam writing to express my concern regarding the decision to demolish the accommodation located at Samarkand. In my opinion this building is playing important role for our life and i believe that if you destroying this building and this build will bring desaster so much to you

Firstly,this accommodation is really amazing and some humans belive that this build never destroy, and this accommodation is not accommodation this is very usefoll for population becouse many people live there, if you demolishing it maybe ohters might not home for living that’s why can you think it very well, instead of demolishing the building, it should be improved it and some people might move there to live maybe they can live longer there so i advise for you, you do not demolishing this building, perhaps, you will fix and improve it. This benifit is good for everyone.I beleve you, you choose right way

Thank you for your attention

Your faithfully

Begoyim Uralova

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

accommodation: 4

building: 4

there: 3

demolishing: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the building's usefulness and suggesting improvements. More specific examples and elaboration would strengthen this aspect.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear sentence structures. Improving grammar and sentence structure would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but limited. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the letter's overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the letter. Significant improvement in grammar is needed to achieve a higher score.

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