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Band 5+: The local council has decided to destroy a building in your neighborhood. You disagree with this decision. Write a letter to the local councilor. In your letter Tell what building is going to be destroyed Explain why the building is useful for people Suggest how to improve the building

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Dear Mr Tomas Brown

I am writing to complain about building which you are going to destroy next week

I regret to inform you that building have in the Sayilgoh street since 2003 year. I can say that this building is very useful for inhabitants of this area. This edifice serve as a sport centre. Sometimes meetings are to happen in the hall. If you demolish this structure inconvients are appear for us.

As I said above there are yoga, massage for kids and women and fitness club for everyone. I the second you can see very wide hall. In this foyer to happen local events and meetings.

Instead of demolishing this efidice, you can restoration it and build another structure for your target.

I hope you understand our situation. I trust that you will take appropriate action.

Your sincerely

Xusanova Jamila

Word Count: 142

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

building: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the explanation of the building's usefulness and suggestions for improvement could be more detailed and persuasive. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but the letter lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impair clarity and accuracy. Improved grammatical accuracy is essential.

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