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Band 5+: The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a map of Garlsdon town, with two potential sites for a new supermarket, marked as S1 and S2. The town has a population of 65,000, with surrounding areas Hindon (12 km away, population 10,000), Bransdon (16 km), and Cransdon (25 km, population 29,000). The map legend outlines various zones including countryside, town center (no traffic zone), housing, industry, railway, and main roads.

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This map shows two potential locations for a new supermarket for the Garlsdon with 65000 population. There are two sites present here for supermarket S1 and S2.

The first potential location S1 is located in the northwest to outside the residental houses. There is better facility of parking for the shopkeepers. This site is near the railway and main road and also connecting with Gralsdon to Hinndun which 12km away with 10000 population. This store is also benefical for the traveller who travel by the train or by road from northwest.

In contras the S2 potential is situated in the centre of the town where no facility of parking is available. It is southren part of the town and surrounded with main raods that connects Garlsdon with other two main towns Bransdon which is 16km away with 15000 population and 25km Cransdon with population of 29000. Furthermore, the railway line runs just the south of the center is not only higly acessible for the local population it is also useful for the visitors from the cannected towns. I

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing both proposed sites and their key features. It covers the main points such as location, accessibility, and surrounding areas. However, there are some minor inaccuracies (e.g., population figures for Bransdon and Cransdon) and a few omissions (e.g., the no-traffic zone in the town center). The structure is clear with a logical progression, but the conclusion is incomplete. To improve, ensure all data is accurate and provide a brief summary or comparison of the two sites.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for each site, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'In contras'). Paragraphing is present but not always well-managed, and the final sentence is incomplete, affecting overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'residental', 'benefical', 'southren', 'acessible', 'cannected') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'better facility of parking' instead of 'ample parking'). The report would benefit from more varied and accurate vocabulary to describe locations and features.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('which 12km away'), incorrect articles ('the Garlsdon'), and incomplete sentences. Punctuation is often missing or misused. While some complex structures are attempted, they are not controlled accurately, and the overall accuracy is low, which significantly hinders clarity.

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