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Band 4+: The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two maps from two time periods, 1995 and present. In 1995, the area included 8 units of housing in the northwest, a hotel in the southeast, 10 shops and a cafe south of a northeast-southeast diagonal road, a fish market south of these, and a sea area in the south with a fishing port. In the northeast, there was farmland, and below that was a forest park with 10 trees. In the present map, the northwest housing remains unchanged with 8 units; the southeast hotel is also unchanged, but it is now accompanied by a car park. A restaurant replaces the 10 shops on the northeast-southeast diagonal road, the fish market is replaced by apartments, and the cafe south of the diagonal road is slightly to the east. Farmland becomes a golf area, and south of it, replacing the forest park, are two tennis courts.

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The maps illustrates considerable development of a countryside of Ryemouth from 1995 to the at present.

Overall, it is notable that new village becomes more visiting friendly area and installed recreational areas due to deforestation.

Starting from initial map, housing area is located on northwestern part of the village, where citizens can accommodate there, while tourist can live in hotel, which is on south-eastern side of map. Next to it was cafe. West side of the map was main road, on the right and left side of it were shops and fish markets respectively. Also, fishing port is available on the south of road. Furthermore, natural features cover almost quarter part of village on southeastern side. Zone is divided into two parts upper and down, where were farmland and forest part correspondingly.

When it comes to todays locations of village, area has opportunities of living standards, to clarify with rise of houses and apartment blocks, which were located in place of fish market. Additionally, car park has built behind the hotel, for tourist comfort. Besides, instead of forest park and farm land there were constructed golf and tennis courts.

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The report addresses the main changes between 1995 and the present, but there are several issues with accuracy and clarity. Some descriptions of the spatial layout are confusing (for example, the placement of the road and the shops/fish market), which makes it difficult for the reader to follow the map. While the report identifies the shift toward recreational facilities, the overview is somewhat vague. To improve, focus on using more precise directional language (e.g., 'to the north of', 'adjacent to') and ensure that the relationship between features is clearly described. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy, particularly regarding verb tenses and article usage, to ensure the comparisons between the two time periods are seamless.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure by separating the description of the 1995 map from the present-day map. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and poor use of cohesive devices. Some transitions feel abrupt, and the organization within paragraphs could be improved to ensure a smoother flow of information. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Meanwhile,' 'Regarding the...') and ensure that each sentence logically follows the previous one to guide the reader through the changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and often inaccurate, which occasionally obscures the intended meaning. For example, phrases like 'more visiting friendly area' and 'opportunities of living standards' are not natural English expressions. There is also some repetitive use of basic words. To improve, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary related to change and development (e.g., 'transformed into,' 'converted,' 'replaced by,' 'expanded') and work on collocations to ensure words are paired naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occur in almost every sentence. There are significant issues with article usage (e.g., 'the at present,' 'a countryside'), subject-verb agreement, and tense consistency (mixing past and present inappropriately). Sentence structures are often simple or incorrectly formed, which can make the report difficult to follow. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, the correct use of articles, and ensuring that when describing past maps, you consistently use the past tense, and when describing the present, you use the present tense or present perfect.

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