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Band 7+: The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a map detailing visitor numbers: Maritime Museum (8000 visitors each day), Aquarium (2000 visitors each day), Art Gallery (750 visitors each day), Sports Centre (500 visitors each day), Eiffel Tower (16,000 visitors each day); notable positions: Maritime Museum (location 1), Aquarium (location 2); geographical references: Right Bank, Left Bank, Bir Hakeim Bridge, Lena Bridge, Debilly Footbridge, the River Seine; transport: Bir Hakeim Metro Station; recreational areas: two parks.

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The map depicts two alternative places for establishing a restaurant in the centre of Paris, which is surrounded by other recreational facilities, namely the Maritime Museum, park, the Eiffel Tower, and Art Gallery.

Overall, both places are located in the city centre, near the River Seine, surrounded by famous tourist attractions. However, Location 1 is positioned on the Right Blank, close to the Maritime Museum and park,whereas Location 2 is located on the Left Blank near the Eiffel Tower and Art Gallery.

Regarding Location 1, it is situated on the northern side of the River Seine. The Maritime Museum, which attracts approximately 8000 visitors each year, is located within walking distance to Location 1. Moreover, a public open space is located immediately to the east of the Location’s 1 side.

As for Location 2, it lies on the Left Blank of the river. Location 2 is located in close proximity to the Eiffel Tower which is the most famous historical landmark , attracting roughly 16000 tourists over the year. Additionally, Location 2 is surrounded by Art Gallery, park, and Debilly Footbridge.

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location: 7

located: 5

which: 3

surrounded: 3

maritime: 3

museum: 3

eiffel: 3

tower: 3

river: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the two locations and their surroundings, and it includes an overall summary. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies: the report does not mention the Aquarium, Sports Centre, or the transport and bridge details, and it incorrectly states 'Right Blank' and 'Left Blank' instead of 'Right Bank' and 'Left Bank'. Additionally, the visitor numbers are described as 'each year' instead of 'each day', which is a key detail. To improve, ensure all key features are covered and check for factual accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for each location. The use of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'However', 'Moreover', 'As for') helps the reader follow the description. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the phrase 'Location's 1 side' which is awkward and disrupts flow. Additionally, the overview could be more concise and clearly state the main trends. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but there is room for improvement in the smoothness of transitions and paragraphing.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for describing maps, such as 'situated', 'located', 'in close proximity to', and 'within walking distance'. There is also some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'depicts', 'surrounded by'). However, there are a few inaccuracies and repetitions: 'Right Blank' and 'Left Blank' should be 'Right Bank' and 'Left Bank'. Also, 'Location's 1 side' is awkward. The phrase 'famous historical landmark' is slightly clichéd. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct spelling and word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including relative clauses (e.g., 'which attracts approximately 8000 visitors each year') and complex sentences. Punctuation is generally correct, but there are a few errors: 'park,whereas' is missing a space after the comma, and '16000' should have a comma for clarity (16,000). Also, 'over the year' is less precise than 'per year' or 'each year'. The phrase 'Location's 1 side' is grammatically incorrect. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but these minor errors prevent it from achieving a higher band.

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