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Band 7+: The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Maps)

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The image shows two layout comparisons: "Village Park 10 years ago" with 2 tennis courts, a children’s play area, a football pitch, a pond, woods, a car park for 20 cars, and an entrance, versus "Village Park Now" with 4 tennis courts, a children’s play area, a children’s soft play area, a football pitch, picnic area, toilets, boating lake, café, a car park for 50 cars, cycle path, and an entrance.

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The maps portrays several significant changes that have taken place in a village park in ten years.

Overall, the village has undergone considerable redevelopment, with some facilities being added and existing features being resized. Additionally, a cycle path has been constructed around the village.

Looking at the top-left corner of the village, car park and tennis courts have become bigger, while the football pitch in the centre has become narrower. At the top-right region, the children’s play area has been shorter and moved a bit to the north, making way for a new children’s soft play area. Toilets also has been built next to the footbal pitch on the right side.

In the bottom area, the pond has been converted into a boating lake, while the place occupied by woods has been removed, giving space for a new cafe. A large picnic area has also appeared at the bottom-left corner of the map, and it is noticeable that the village has been equiped with a cycle path around it.

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Task Response

The report provides a clear overview and describes the main changes, including the expansion of the car park and tennis courts, the addition of a soft play area, toilets, café, picnic area, and the construction of a cycle path. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the football pitch is described as 'narrower' without clear comparison, the pond is said to be 'converted' into a boating lake (which is acceptable), and the woods are described as 'removed' (which is fine), but the report does not mention the increase in car park capacity (from 20 to 50 cars) or the exact number of tennis courts (from 2 to 4). Additionally, there are minor grammatical errors (e.g., 'portrays' should be 'portray', 'has been built' should be 'have been built', 'equiped' should be 'equipped'). To improve, ensure all key features are mentioned and check subject-verb agreement and spelling.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized and generally easy to follow, with a clear overall statement and a division into two main paragraphs describing changes in different areas. However, the cohesion could be improved by using a wider range of linking devices and ensuring smoother transitions between ideas. For example, the phrase 'Looking at the top-left corner' is a good start, but the subsequent sentences could be more clearly connected. Additionally, the final paragraph could be better linked to the previous one to enhance the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'undergone considerable redevelopment', 'converted into', and 'giving space for'. There is some effective use of synonyms (e.g., 'bigger', 'narrower', 'shorter'). However, there are a few inaccuracies and less precise word choices, such as 'shorter' for describing the play area (better: 'smaller' or 'reduced in size') and 'equiped' (spelling error). To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates an attempt to use a range of grammatical structures, including passive voice and comparative forms. However, there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. For example, 'The maps portrays' should be 'The maps portray' (subject-verb agreement), 'Toilets also has been built' should be 'Toilets have also been built', and 'the children's play area has been shorter' is incorrect (should be 'has become smaller'). Additionally, there are punctuation issues, such as missing commas. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of plural/singular forms, and proofreading for minor errors.

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