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Band 5+: The maps beiow show the changes experienced by the tovvn of Harton at the beginning of the 21 st Century. Summarise the information by se/ecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary.

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The image compares two maps of Harton in 2008 and 2016, showing changes in the area over this period. In 2008, features include a residential area in the southwest, an art center to its northeast, residential areas to the southeast and northwest, a river flowing northeast to southwest, an industrial complex in the south-central area, an old town center west of the industrial complex, a lake east of the old town, derelict warehouses north of the old town, and woodland north of the lake. By 2016, changes include a pond in place of the lake, woodland remains to the north, additions of a car park east of the new pond, offices southeast of the car park, and a university east of the offices. The old town and derelict warehouses space is now occupied by a multi-screen cinema and a shopping center. Two secondary roads are visible in each map as connections without alterations.

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the map displays the main change which took place in the town of Harton between 2008 and 2016.

Overall, it is immidiately noticable that Harton has become a much modern city, with far more buildings and facilities. Meanwhile, the natural area followed the opposite pattern, getting smaller space.

to begin with the northwest part, the warehouse has been demolished and converted into a car park. Neaby that, Old town has been eradicated to make way for a university and offices. In 2008, there was a arts centre at the west, but it has been renovated to a modern cinema. Besides, the southwest hadn’t change at all.

Moving onto the northeast and southeast part, in 2008, it used to have more green space, but industrial complex ,which had a trivial size at the beginning of the given period, has been enlarged tremendously and supplanted almost 1/2 of the green area. Another striking point is that lake has beenturned into a pond.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing changes in Harton between 2008 and 2016, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the warehouse is said to become a car park, while the visual indicates it becomes part of a cinema and shopping center; the old town is said to become a university and offices, but it actually becomes a cinema and shopping center; and the arts centre is said to become a cinema, but it becomes a pond. Additionally, the industrial complex is said to expand, but the visual shows it is replaced by offices and a university. The report also omits key changes such as the addition of a car park, offices, and university in the east, and the conversion of the lake to a pond. To improve, ensure all major changes are accurately described and avoid misinterpreting the visual information. The overall structure is clear, but more precise language and attention to detail are needed.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear references (e.g., 'the northwest part' when the warehouse is actually north of the old town). Cohesive devices are used but occasionally inaccurately (e.g., 'Besides' for addition). Paragraphing is present but could be more logical; for instance, grouping changes by geographical area is good, but the description jumps between locations. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear aspect, use cohesive devices accurately, and proofread to avoid errors that hinder coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at less common words (e.g., 'eradicated', 'supplanted', 'trivial size'). However, there are inaccuracies in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'modern city' instead of 'modern town', 'arts centre' misspelled, 'hadn't change' instead of 'hadn't changed'). Spelling errors (e.g., 'immidiately', 'noticable', 'Neaby', 'beenturned') also reduce the score. To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to maps and changes, and use a dictionary to check spelling and appropriate word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that cause some difficulty for the reader. These include incorrect verb tenses (e.g., 'has beenturned' instead of 'has been turned'), subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the southwest hadn't change'), article errors (e.g., 'a arts centre'), and preposition issues (e.g., 'at the west' instead of 'in the west'). Punctuation is also inconsistent (e.g., missing commas, incorrect use of 'Besides,'). While some complex structures are attempted, accuracy is limited. To improve, focus on basic grammar rules, proofread carefully, and practice constructing accurate sentences.

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