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Band 6+: The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates two diagrams. The current industrial site diagram (top) includes Toe Lane (west), Chimney Road (north), Pie Walk (east), and Swallow Street (south), with: parking, storage, entrance and reception, yard, factory, canteen, eight offices. The new housing development plan diagram (bottom) includes: 3-bedroom house, 4-bedroom house, communal gardens, private road, parking garages, 2-bedroom houses (four units), parking area, apartment. Cross-referencing road names: Toe Lane, Chimney Road, Pie Walk, Swallow Street.

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These images show the reconstructing plan of an industrial facility. Overall, new housing is expected to provide a living area instead of offices. The new plan illustrates numerous bedrooms as well as a designated place for parking.

New housing would have less space due to removal of a yard and adding of new buildings. Instead of factory, apartment building will rise with a private road next door. New building will be developed in the middle of the yard, providing living places and communal gardens to the residents. Moreover, constructers are planning to add another parking in addition to the existing one.

After the reconstruction, all the offices will be removed and replaced with parking garages and apartments. In addition, private roads will be built in this area. Instead of yard, a fresh facility will be placed that includes communal gardens as well as 6 bedroom houses. Furthermore, next to toe lane, another residential building will show up.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main changes from an industrial site to a housing development. It identifies key features such as the removal of the factory and yard, and the addition of apartments, communal gardens, and parking. Comparisons are made between the two plans. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., '6 bedroom houses' instead of 3- and 4-bedroom houses) and minor omissions (e.g., not mentioning the specific number of offices or the exact layout of new buildings). The language is generally clear, but could be more precise. To improve, focus on accurately reporting specific details from the visual and ensure all key features are covered.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, with an overview followed by specific details. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'New building will be developed in the middle of the yard') and abrupt transitions. Paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to separate the description of the current site from the proposed changes. Using clearer linking words and ensuring each paragraph has a central focus would improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'reconstructing plan', 'designated place for parking'). However, there are instances of imprecise or informal word choices (e.g., 'constructers', 'show up', 'fresh facility'). To achieve a higher score, aim for more sophisticated and accurate lexical items, such as 'redevelopment', 'residential units', and 'amenities'. Avoid repetition of basic terms like 'new' and 'building'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity (e.g., 'the reconstructing plan', 'adding of new buildings', 'a fresh facility will be placed'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but sentence construction needs improvement. To raise the score, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of articles, and more natural sentence structures. Proofreading for common errors would be beneficial.

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