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Band 5+: The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates two diagrams. The current industrial site diagram (top) includes Toe Lane (west), Chimney Road (north), Pie Walk (east), and Swallow Street (south), with: parking, storage, entrance and reception, yard, factory, canteen, eight offices. The new housing development plan diagram (bottom) includes: 3-bedroom house, 4-bedroom house, communal gardens, private road, parking garages, 2-bedroom houses (four units), parking area, apartment. Cross-referencing road names: Toe Lane, Chimney Road, Pie Walk, Swallow Street.

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The two maps illustrate the layout of an industral area in today and the development plan. Looking from an overall perspective, it is evident that the pie walk, the swallow street, toe line, and the chimney road remained unchanged, significant develpments occurred in other areas, including the addition of a parking garages, an apartment, and bedroom house.

According to the provided data in today, the entrance and reception was included next to the yard in north corner, both of west and south corner included the parking and factory on the map. However, in the central area, there was yard next to the office and canteen, the storage was contructed of along near the office in southwest part on the map.

To begin with by future plan, the parking and the storge will be converted of bedroom house in left hand side on the map. Additionally, in the central area of the map will be the yard removed and built a communal gardens between privet road and two bedroom house.

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bedroom: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is present but could be improved for clarity. The language contains errors that sometimes impede understanding. To improve, focus on accurately representing the key features of both maps, ensure clear and logical organization, and refine grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always easy to follow. The introduction provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. The organization could be improved by grouping similar features together and using more effective transition words to guide the reader through the information. For example, instead of saying 'To begin with by future plan,' you could use phrases like 'In the proposed development' or 'According to the future plan'.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are instances of imprecise word choice. For example, 'industral area' should be 'industrial area,' and 'bedroom house' is not as precise as specifying the number of bedrooms (e.g., 'three-bedroom houses'). To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to urban planning and development. Consider using synonyms for common words and phrases to demonstrate a wider lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense ('was included' instead of 'is located'), subject-verb agreement ('developments occurred'), and article usage ('a parking garages' should be 'parking garages'). Sentence structure is also sometimes awkward, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring that your grammar is accurate. Proofreading carefully for errors in tense, agreement, and article usage is essential.

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