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Band 5+: The maps below illustrate the current design of an office building and the proposed layout after redevelopment. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image illustrates two floor plans: the "Present Office Building" with a central entrance leading to four offices on one side and a kitchen, canteen, storeroom, and WCs aligned on the opposite side, flanked by two grassy areas; the "Future Office Building" retains the central entrance and the four offices, but rearranges the kitchen, now beside an added outdoor seating area; the storeroom and WCs are compactly aligned adjacent to a newly added coffee machine; a meeting area replaces the central entrance's immediate facing office section, with chairs filling the remaining area.

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The maps show how an office building will be redeveloped with the current and future design.

Overall, the office building experience major transformations. Most noticeably, grass areas will be made into other rooms. Moreover, office will be expanded in order to complete modernized process of office building.

Two grass areas in the left and right of map will be transformed. Grass area in the left of map will be turned into out door seating area. Besides, grass area in the right of map will be developed into coffee machine and meeting area with chairs.

In terms of offices, offices will be extended, four offices will be developed into two big offices and kitchen, canteen will be turned into two offices. Furthermore, there will be some small changes. In the present, entrance is built in the right of map, it will be relocated in the middle of map in the future. Besides, WCs in the bottom of storeroom will be moved to the right corner of map.

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The report adequately addresses the task by comparing and contrasting the two maps. However, some details are inaccurate or missing, and the overview could be more precise and comprehensive.

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Band 5+: The maps below illustrate the current design of an office building and the proposed layout after redevelopment. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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