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Band 4+: The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two comparative illustrations labeled "Nelson, 2000" and "Nelson, today". The 2000 illustration features buildings and areas tagged as university, train station, city center with a single low-rise stall representing an old market, port, and a hall of residence, depicted without specific numerical data. The "Nelson, today" illustration includes advancements like a new shopping center, new train station, bicycle rental scheme, pedestrian-only markings around the city center, a new covered market instead of the old market, additional rows of bar and club icons near the port, a restaurant, and new pedestrian walkways. It maintains similar basic layout elements like the university, train station, and port seen in the 2000 depiction but with additional contemporary features. No quantitative data present.

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The pictures below illustrates the city Nelson changing in the 2000 to now.

Overall, the city Nelson, compares a huge modifications in trees to new shopping centre aslo the train station is removed in new Nelson city.In the south-east of the city center the new covered market development, restaurant in the south of pedestrian.

The Nelson city is now going to the development side like the construction of the new covered market which is in the east.Next the in south side of the old Nelson city the train station is demolished to a new tarin station in center of the Nelson city Now.

Unfortunately, the trees were removed and the new shopping centre is build in the north of developed city.The restaurant is also constructed in the Nelson city.The barn and clubs is present in the south of the pedestrian bridge.The road is changed to the pedestrian only.The University is ramins on the same place.The building hall of residence is constructed well shape. The old market converted into the new shop.And now the Nelson 2000 city is well development to Nelson today about in 26 yaers.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing some changes between the two maps, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. Key features such as the new shopping center, new train station, pedestrian-only area, and new covered market are mentioned, but some details are incorrect (e.g., the train station is not removed but relocated, and the old market is replaced by a covered market, not converted into a shop). The report also includes irrelevant or unclear information (e.g., 'trees removed' and '26 years' are not supported by the visual). The structure is somewhat disorganized, with unclear referencing and grammatical errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main changes, organizing the information logically (e.g., by area or type of change), and using clearer language with proper grammar and punctuation.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information but lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. The introduction is brief and the overview is vague, mixing details without clear grouping. Cohesive devices are used ineffectively, and the progression of ideas is often confusing. To improve, structure the report with a clear introduction, an overview paragraph highlighting the main changes, and body paragraphs that group related changes (e.g., transport, commercial areas, public spaces). Use a range of linking words and referencing to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'barn and clubs' instead of 'bars and clubs', 'tarin' for 'train', 'remains' misspelled). There is an attempt to use some topic-specific terms (e.g., 'pedestrian-only', 'covered market', 'shopping centre'), but the range is narrow and errors in word form and collocation are frequent. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing maps (e.g., 'relocated', 'converted', 'expanded', 'introduced') and practice using precise nouns and adjectives. Ensure correct spelling and word choice.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding, including subject-verb agreement ('the pictures below illustrates'), incorrect verb forms ('is build', 'is removed'), and inconsistent tense usage. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently missing or incorrect. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct subject-verb agreement and consistent past tense for describing past changes. Review basic grammar rules and practice proofreading to reduce errors.

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