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Band 5+: The maps below show changes in the town of Hillingford between 2000 and 2015.

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The image displays two maps comparing Hillingford in 2000 and 2015. In 2000: Country House at NW, Woods directly south of Country House, Fields directly south of Woods, a School in the NE, Housing directly south of School, a Market in the center south-west to Housing; south of Market, a Shop, a Café directly east of Shop, another Shop directly east of Café; Beach directly south of Shops along Sea, Harbour SE along Sea. In 2015: added Hotel and Train Station NE, Supermarket SE of School and directly south-east of Housing, Bed & Breakfast SW of Supermarket along beach, Flats west to Housing in central grid having Tennis Courts west to Flats bordered by Playground to their direct north, Restaurants directly west to Tennis Courts and Restaurants directly north to Café and directly east to Shops; Beach along south border, Harbour SE along Sea.

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The maps reveal data about changes in the town of Hillingford in two different timelines: 2000 and 2015.

Overall, it is clear that town underwent significant alterations in several facilities, becoming more residential in 2015, especially on the western side of the town.However, eastern mainly remained unchanged, but some amenities was added.

Looking at the graph in more detailed way, we can notice that in the western side several buildings was replaced or cahnged, particularly country house which was replaced by hotel and housing, offfering more comfortable conditions to citizens.Also, amenities like flats, tennis courts, playgrounds, restaurants were added compared to the fields with a wood in 2015.

On the other hand, eastern site largely did not demonstrated any changes except train station was added and instead of housing bed, breakfast area were erected.Not only school, housing were remained unchanged, but also considerable figures like beach and harbour illustrated the same thing.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes in Hillingford between 2000 and 2015, and it provides an overall summary. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the task achievement. For instance, the report incorrectly states that the country house was replaced by hotel and housing, whereas the visual description indicates the hotel was added in the northeast, and the country house and woods were removed. Additionally, the report mentions 'bed, breakfast area' which is unclear and not accurately described. The report also omits key changes such as the supermarket, bed and breakfast, and the specific locations of new amenities. The language contains grammatical errors and informal phrasing (e.g., 'cahnged', 'offfering', 'eastern site largely did not demonstrated'), which affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate representation of the data, include all major changes, and use more precise and formal language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by abrupt transitions and incomplete ideas. The overview is somewhat vague and does not clearly summarize the main changes. Paragraphing is present but not always logical, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a range of linking words and referencing to connect sentences and ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are some attempts at less common words (e.g., 'significant alterations', 'amenities'), but there are also errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'cahnged', 'offfering', 'illustrated the same thing'). The report would benefit from a wider variety of accurate and appropriate vocabulary, especially to describe changes and locations. Use more precise terms like 'demolished', 'constructed', 'converted', and 'expanded' to enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'some amenities was added', 'several buildings was replaced'), incorrect verb forms, and missing articles. There are also spelling mistakes (e.g., 'cahnged', 'offfering', 'site' for 'side'). The range of sentence structures is limited, and complex sentences are often attempted but not controlled. To improve, focus on accurate use of tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Proofreading for spelling and punctuation is also essential.

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