Map

Band 4+: The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows changes at Riverage College from 30 years ago to now: 30 years ago featured Sport Hall, Flower, Terrace, Refectory, Library, Common Room, five Offices, Reception, and Car Park; currently, it includes Sport Hall, Step, Terrace, Library, Cafe, one Office, Art-Class Room, Reception, and Music Room with a notable omission of the Car Park and addition of a green tree.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The map gives the information about the renew of riverage college 30 years ago and now.

In general the map shows some parts of the college have modified their design and arrangement.

30 years ago sport hall were at north right it still remain same near sport hall at south right there were flower and just up there was terrace libaray wa between refectory and common room now it is between office and cafe reception were below the office and at east left there were car parking

Before office consist 4 room now it is only one room up of library and below library there is cafe reception is in middle of art class room and music room below reception there is music room and up there is art room at east right insted of car park it is changed into tree.

Word Count: 142

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 6

right: 3

office: 3

reception: 3

below: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization, clarity, and accuracy. The description of the changes is somewhat difficult to follow due to a lack of clear structure and imprecise language. To improve, focus on organizing the information more logically, using more precise language to describe locations and changes, and ensuring accurate reporting of the details presented in the maps. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing, making it difficult to follow the changes described. The writing jumps between different areas without clear transitions. Consider organizing the report into paragraphs that each focus on a specific area or aspect of the college's transformation. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in contrast,' 'similarly') to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive ('there were,' 'now it is'). There's limited use of specific vocabulary related to map descriptions (e.g., 'to the north,' 'in the southeast corner'). Expand your vocabulary by learning synonyms for common words and phrases. Use more precise language to describe locations and changes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('sport hall were'), subject-verb agreement issues ('office consist'), and incorrect preposition usage ('up of library'). Sentence structure is also often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The provided map compares two layouts of Riverage College: one from 30 years ago and the current layout. Overall, it is evident that the college’s infrastructure has undergone some reconstruction and there are several new additions. However, some areas have remained unchanged, such as the sports hall, terrace, and library. In the layout from 30 […]

Band 9

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

Certain map illustrates some of the changes that happened with a college in 30 years. There’re clearly seen different innovations that took their places in such long period. In general if we throw a quick browse we can see such changes as different layout of the building. Some parts of the college have modified their […]

Band 6+

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The diagrams delineate the transformation in Riverage college over the past three decades. Overall, in 30 years, Riverage college has undergone several modifications, particularly in the middle and the east side of the area, with more eco-friendly features added. To commence with, on the left-hand side of Riverage college, while the sport hall remained the […]

Band 7+

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The map illustrates how the Riverage college has changed following the development made in 30 years. Overall, there have been significant changes in the college in terms of various rooms. However, it is noteworthy that some of the facilities such as Sport Hall, Terrace, Library and Reception have not undergone any changes. Initially, there were […]

Band 7+

See All

The two maps below show a housing estate now,and how it will look after redevelopment

The two maps compare housing estate condition present and future position after plans of reconstruction. Overall, it is evident from maps that there will be significnt development. The main change is in north side and one, two, three- bedroom houses resulting the dissapearence of four-bedroom houses. More detailed, at the present this place is residental […]

Band 5+

The maps show the changes of a small village from 1995 to present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate how a small village changed between 1995 and the present, focusing on alterations in its layout and facilities. Overall, the village has undergone considerable development, with farmland and natural areas being replaced by recreational facilities and residential buildings. In addition, commercial amenities have been upgraded to accommodate increased activity. In 1995, the […]

Band 9

the plans below show the South Wing of Walton Museum in 2008 and 2012 after it was redeveloped. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The plans illustrate how the layout of South Wing of Walton Museum changed from 2008 to 2012. Overall the part of the museum experienced significant transformation over the period, with introduction of new fasilities and rearangement of old blocks. The final development of the museum generally became more welcoming and toursit-frendly. In 2008, the site […]

Band 5+

The two plans below show the City Library in 2004 and 2014.

The maps show differences in a city library structure between 2004 and 2014. Overall, the library exterior did not change, new Outdoor Performance area appeared behind the library. Both library wings changed significantly, especially the southern wing, which has been completely changed. In the 2004, there was reception desk next to the entrance and a […]

Band 7+

The maps below show the current layout of a public library and the planned changes to the building in the future.

The maps illustrate the current layout of a public library and how it is planned to be redeveloped in the future. Overall, the library is expected to undergo significant reorganization, with reading room being reduced in size to make way for study rooms, while new facilities such as media room and outdoor seating area will […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 4+: The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

The maps below show information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now.

Other Topics:

The two maps below show a housing estate now,and how it will look after redevelopment

The maps show the changes of a small village from 1995 to present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the plans below show the South Wing of Walton Museum in 2008 and 2012 after it was redeveloped. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarker. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relerant.

The two plans below show the City Library in 2004 and 2014.

The maps below show the current layout of a public library and the planned changes to the building in the future.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium